- Page # 88 - Sparx Retalliates
- Page # 87 - Harpoon Blow!
- Page # 86 - Water & Shadow Clone Jutsu
- Page # 85 - Sparx is Charging
- Page # 84 - Aron's Storm Edge
- Page # 83 - Sparx Attacks!!!
- Page # 82 - Sparx Makes His Move
- Page # 81 - Abort Mission
- Page # 80 - Hook, Line, and ESCAPE?
- Page # 79 - Greg and Kaion's Well Being
- Page # 78 - Furtherment in Plans
- Page # 77 - OMG! Fillers on the Loose
- Page # 76 - Success Everywhere
- Page # 75 - Ryo's Partially Done IT!
- Page # 74 - Everybody LOVES a Filler
- Page # 73 - New Effects
- Page # 72 - Back to Whence They Came
Chapter 6 - Escape From The Rain Village Part 1
- Page # 71 - To the Rain Village
- R.U.1. the Movie
- Hiatus...AGAIN!
- iTurkey
- Page # 70 - The Third Member
- Page # 69 - Where's your Jonin?
- Page # 68 - Rendezvous
- Page # 67 - Team Mark
- Page # 66 - William's Done in by W.Z.
- Page # 65 - Desert Storm vs. Heat Wave
- Page # 64 - Hurricane's Hallucination
- Page # 63 - Team Zenaku
- Page # 62 - Gimp Efforts
- Page # 61 - Master William vs Zenaku Bros
- HAPPY HALLOWEEN
- Page # 60 - the BOSS's Past
- Page # 59 - E.M. Departs for Plans
Chapter 5 - E.M.
- Page # 58 - E.M.
- Page # 57 - Hurricane To the Rescue
- Page # 56 - Conclusive Battle
- Page # 55 - Rei Strikes Back
- Page # 54 - Flare Zenaku Gets Serious
- Page # 53 - A Battle Emerges
- Page # 52 - The Calm Before the Storm
- Page # 51 - My Return
- 3-Week Hiatus
- Page # 50 - Ryo's Progression
- Page # 49 - Wave Zenaku's Friend
- Page # 48 - Get Go
- Page # 47 - Flare & Wave Zenaku
- Page # 46 - Insert Page Title Here
- Page # 45 - Plot Development
Chapter 4 - Training Ryo
- Page # 44 - End of Chapter 3
- Page # 43 - Insert Page Title Here
- Page # 42 - The Battle's Over
- Page # 41 - Ryo's Element p2
- Page # 40 - Ryo's Element p1; Conversation
- Page # 39 - Shadow Village at LAST; Meet Greg
- Page # 38 - Miya appears & takes Kaion
- Page # 37 - Ryo's Explainations; Aron's Question
- Page # 36 - Ryo is Healed by Tae
- Page # 35 - Hurricane chats with Flare Zenaku; SIGNALED
- Page # 34 - Fire Style: Fireball Jutsu; Kaion pwns Rei 2
- Page # 33 - Ryo's Defeated; Kaion vs. Rei
- Page # 32 - Tae & Christina; Kaion pwns Rei; Rasengan vs. Oodama Flare
- Page # 31 - Ryo and F.Z.'s Battle Continues; Battle of the Uchiha Bros.
- Page # 30 - Kaion Uchiha's Appearance; Aron's Short Attention Span
Chapter 3 - Coping
- Page # 29 - Ryo and Flare Zenaku Even Match; For Now. . .
- Page # 28 - Ryo uses Ryuu's Power; REAL Battle Begins
- Page # 27 - Ryo and Ryuu
- Page # 26 - Christina's Shadow's Grasp: Feather Bullets; Six Down
- Page # 25 - The Search for Ryo; Christina's Shadow's Grasp
- Page # 24 - Flare Zenaku's Jaaku no Honoo; The Interrogation. . . a BUST!
- Page # 23 - Ryo and Flare Zenaku BATTLE!
- Page # 22 - Aron's Summoning Jutsu; Five Down
- Page # 21 - Uzumaki-Uchiha Barrage; Four Down; Flare Zenaku's Appearance
- Page # 20 - Bengals Wrath Unleashed; Two Down
- Page # 19 - A Fight Breaks Out; Ryo's Rasengan
- Page # 18 - Looks Like Company has Arrived
- Page # 17 - Secret Mission
- Page # 16 - Tae's New Look p2; The Mission Actually Starts
- Page # 15 - Tae's New Look p1
Chapter 2 - The Grand Mission
- Page # 14 - Mission Assignments; Chapter 1 (End)
- Page # 13 - Ryo's Cute??????
- Page # 12 - Mission Briefing p1; Meet Christina
- Page # 11 - Rei's back; Now the Briefing can Begin
- Page # 10 - Damn Tae's Strong!!!
- Page # 9 - Ryo's back; Tae appears
- Page # 8 - Ryo is found; What's that in your hair
- Page # 7 - Aron makes his Appearance; Ryo's missing?
- Page # 6 - Criminal caught; Let's go Home
- Page # 5 - Ryo unleashes Ninjutsu; Wind Manipulation Whirlwind
- Page # 4 - Ryo & Criminal Brawl; Ryo gets Serious
- Page # 3 - Ryo & Rei split up; Ryo takes on Criminal
- Page # 2 - Rei joins the Fight; but Criminal takes his Leave?!
- Page # 1 - Enter Ryosaki "Ryo" Uzumaki
Chapter 1: The First Days of Being a Genin
- Prolouge p10 (THE FINAL PART)
- Prolouge p9
- Prolouge p8
- Easter Special
- Prolouge p7
- Proluge p6
- Prolouge p5
- Prolouge p4
- Prolouge p3
- Prolouge p2
- Prolouge p1
Title Page
Prolouge p8
shaun on April 12, 2008
Sory i took so long with this one, but i was just brushing up on what's been going down in Naruto Shippuden, and most of it changed my plot, but the next page will definitly blow your mind
anonymous at 5:12PM, May 4, 2008
wow shaun it really gd
Howey at 9:18PM, April 18, 2008
nice page but i think you should make some ree colours for roy and the rest of the squad also fav'd
Rags at 10:26AM, April 15, 2008
Along with what Wronex(Myollnir Catra)Textboxes would be nice as well.
godblaster at 5:26AM, April 15, 2008
Finally! yay!
Myollnir Catra at 6:54PM, April 13, 2008
Adding to my last comment too, style clashing isn't a good idea either. That Hinata sprite on your banner doesn't seem to match the comic's style, and the G.Dragon from Breath of Fire II is a definite no-no. It's terribly resized AND doesn't fit. =/ I mean, we have to start somewhere, but how can you think it looks good like that?
Myollnir Catra at 6:50PM, April 13, 2008
I would strongly suggest making your original characters more... well, original. Ryo is just a younger Naruto. Not just Ryo, but Rei, Tae, Miya and Aron should be changed as well. What are they? Doppelgangers of existing characters? And if you say they're kids of Naruto, Sasuke, Sakura, Hinata and Kakashi, even children aren't mirrored copies of their parents. =/ And... "Kyuubi Dragon"? WTF? How in any way is it possible? Kyuubi is a nine-tailed FOX. Not Dragon.
poonipoonz at 6:16PM, April 13, 2008
Yay!!!! Prologue is done!!!