Metempsychosis: page 12
Freakeh on Feb. 10, 2007
Ahhh! I'm so sorry for the lack of update on Saturday! I was really tired and woke up late, and by the time I -did- wake up, there wasn't enough hours in the day -left- -to- complete the page xP I'm so sorry! I'll update on Tuesday to make up for it!
I'm not happy with how this page came out… it looked much cooler in pencil XD I spent a lot of time considering the speech bubble placement for once, and on the paper version there was tons of space left for the text. But once it gets scanned in… suddenly there's no space at all! It sucks! But I -do- like the moon in the second panel. That makes up for it… maybe.
I just want to take this as an oppurtunity to thank all of you, for being so supportive! You've taken the time to read and comment on Salimah even when I am not able to return the favour… So thank you all so much! You guys rock! *Hugs and cookies all round*
And now onto responses!
@Rubygem: -That- bad, huh? xD;;
@Tantz: Oh! I think I get what you mean! I still fail at conveying it, though xD;
Nausea indeed! I liked drawing the first panel as it allowed me to show a little more insight into Z.'s reaction to situations such as these. :3 I want people to think that the Donovan's ceasing to exist was -sad-… regardless of him being the supposed enemy. I love writing for the Donovan as a whole, as they are all so different though they look so alike! (None of the other Donovan have had a chance to speak yet, but I'm partial to the personality of the one you saw sweat-dropping on page 9)
XDD Totally! Why do I get the weird craving to -create- that email now and speak for Zotia through it…
@pv_chan: Yay thank you! =D
@animegal: Yesh Z. does react negatively to -anyone- getting hurt… Z. sort of admires the Donovan's strength of will to continue fighting, but as you can see he doesn't like that the Donovan is doing so.
@DancingChaos: Hey! =D Awww poor Cayden ): I hope he finds someone to ease that pain.
Aww thank you X3 Dramatic? Really?! This is the proudest moment of my life ='3
@Glass: Yay thank you x3
@eko: your shotgun seems to have done the trick! o_o Thing is, the Donovan already -has- touched your Z. … XD He's been cut across teh cheek! O:
@Joff: Yesh they are pesky like that… but there's also the problem of staying -too- dead when you don't want them to -be- dead, isn't there? ;P
@Magicalmisfits: It's funny you should mention a post office. I once had a dream where Zotia had a hoarde of letters, all categorised by name so he could keep information on people. And in my dream it was actually Zotia sending -Z.- a message, rather than the other way around. XD Dreams are weird.
@Dragonzilla: I get the feeling that people would read it as long as it wasn't horribly bad, so the amount of support doesn't necessarily mean it's a great comic ;P Just has great readers!
@Brokenhill: Another one! XD
@EmilyTheStrange: Wow I love that it hints at surrealism, as it is supposed to be a fantasy after all =3 thank you! X3
@eyesoftheblackk: X3 thank you!!
@kyupol: Thank you! ^_^
@Dockworker: Really? XD Yay! And totally wasn't inspired by Devil May Cry, nooooo.
@Nigellashade: They are indeed driven by very powerful reasoning. :3 But in their desparation to -please- their master, they sometimes lose sight of their master's -will-. o:
I only -really- use backgrounds to replace white space… As long as the panel beyond the character isn't completely blank, I'm happy. I don't really push myself too hard… Maybe I should, but I would need a reference as I'm not good at -creating- a non-simplistic background…
Awww thank you ^-^ And you have a good week, too :3
@simonitro: Stop calling yourself lame, ‘cause you’re not ;P And yea the Donovan -are- tough, as long as their -insides- stay intact… but as soon as their core is subject to their weakness of light energy, they start burning from the inside (hence the *hiss*). They're pratically invincible to physical attacks though, that -don't- harm their aura directly. So it's the Donovan equivalent to a human's blood coming out of him. =3
@dracco: Squee someone was wondering about Metempsychosis! X3 It means, the transmigration of the soul after death… whether it departs to another place, and if so where does it go. :3 It refers to the Donovan's defeat, as his soul is now misplaced.
@Toshubi: You're psychic, man! XD
@Finwik: gasp you noticed the sound effects! x3 I wasn't sure what to use for the pushing of a sword through your body… so I'm glad it disturbed you, that means it's working. >:3 And thank you! ^_^
@Pink: Aww you're so kind XD thank you~!
@Aereis: And as soon as you say that, I missed the next update XD Aside from being late with this week's pages, I'll try to! O:
@herio: :3 yesh.
@insanelysane: Have you ever had the feeling of wishing something, but when it actually happened you felt guilty about wanting it to be true? For example, in the TV show “8 Simple Rules”, the father figure died… I said, “The TV show actually got better once the dad died”… and -then- I found out he died -in real life- and I felt really bad. I also said the same for the book “Lord of the Flies”: before reading it/watching the film, I was like, “I cannot WAIT until Piggy dies.” But when he did, I didn't realise how horrible his death would be… and felt bad about saying -that- as well, because I ended up being horrified by it and didn't want it to happen, in the end. XD So I hope you feel guilty too >3 I personally like teh Donovan, as individuals X3
@Mr Dynamo: Hmm I think cutting their head off wouldn't do any damage either, they'd just reform it out of shadow. Unless the blade their head was cut off with was blessed, exposing the Donovan's inside of their neck to that blessing… Basically it's the blessing that does the damage, not the attack. :3 I'm glad -you- like the expression in the second panel, as I hate it. XD
@magick: And very metaphorical, too. Can you imagine the Donovan -literally- taking Z.'s blood to Zotia? Like, in a jar or something? *shivers*
@DRose: Apparently so XD
@cameron11691: XD I take that as a good “WHOA” rather than a bad one, so thank you X3
@kingofsnake: Oh wow thank you for reading! =D
@JillyFoo: Only kinda, yesh. :3
@Adariel: Thank you! =3
@Jenshin: Yay for light indeed X3 For some reason I'm reminded of the quote; “In times of darkness, hope is something you give yourself. That is the true meaning of inner strength”. Miyoko very much wants to -be- that hope. o:
@rana: heehee thank you for reading x3~ I'm glad you liked it =D
@Collosus: Oh wow that's so kind of you! X3 thank you so much~!
@Oren: *Must… resist… urge… to quote… the “Zing!”…*
heehee thank you… I don't like that panel O:
@shaneronzio: thank you! :3
@Shingo: Hey! Thanks for reading x3
Dragonzilla at 9:21PM, Feb. 15, 2007
Poor bad guy, he went bye-bye... YAY!
insanelysane at 8:36AM, Feb. 15, 2007
and yeah, I really felt really bad for the Donovan. =/ The way he died was so muted and sad that it feels kinda empty that he's gone.
Collossus at 6:56AM, Feb. 15, 2007
very nice save lol
Nigellashade at 8:34PM, Feb. 14, 2007
My sister and I appreciates your attention to using your pencil skills, the most reliable version of the tools of the trade within the arts.. Seeing the emotion being created with these enemies, holds a lot of sorrow.. I wonder what gave them the impression, that they need his blood to set them free. But this has a very sad twist to it fate, between the levels of good vs evil in the story.. I think many has they're reasons.. ~___~.. Lovely heart felt update Freakeh, I hope your Valentines was a bright and positive event. ~Angel hugs to you~ & take care... ~M~ v~~~~v
Dockworker at 7:23PM, Feb. 14, 2007
Freakeh, you are an awesome story teller. nice dramatic death scene. I'm always impressed by the way you respond to everyones comments in your update space, most people with alot of readers don't seem to take that time, you've got character.
Twin at 3:31PM, Feb. 14, 2007
Have I commented on this page? No? Well...it's very emotive. ...That's all I got. >_
Frail at 2:43PM, Feb. 14, 2007
Awwww...poor Donovan... I likes this page, Freakeh. It gives insight. That and all the pannels with the Donovan are wicked awesome.
DRose at 9:01AM, Feb. 14, 2007
Talk about a fate worse than death. Your immortal soul trapped. I feel for the guy now.
shaneronzio at 12:30PM, Feb. 13, 2007
Wo...w. that rawkt.
Jenshin at 4:06AM, Feb. 13, 2007
PRESENT FOR YOU!!!! http://www.randomisgod.com/art/Miyoko.JPG
Jenshin at 1:28AM, Feb. 13, 2007
*hugs and cookies back to you* It's okay when you don't update! It gives me a chance to catch up.. What "freedom" is he talking about? Ooo.. intriguing.. And he disappears into darkness.
cameron11691 at 8:59PM, Feb. 12, 2007
gotta feel sorry for the guy XD
insanelysane at 7:18PM, Feb. 12, 2007
ok that REALLY got me. I think the emotions expressed were really good and i really felt sorry for the donovan! The way you emote this page is really flowy. absolutely adore the 3rd and 4th panel. The last panel really brought out how muted and sad the whole situation is. Excellent job!
Luminous at 1:33PM, Feb. 12, 2007
Is it just me, or does Z look like he feels kind of sad for the Donovan in the first panel? I love the fourth panel... It gave me chills O: I have an idea about the Donovan, but I don't want to say it in case I'm right and I spoil anything >>. But I will say that it seems they're developing into slightly more sympathetic antagonists :3
simonitro at 9:10PM, Feb. 11, 2007
Like they say, "he took all the wind out that was in him". That's why they're filled with so many winds inside them... guess, they're always under the weather as it seems. These guys can create some fake climate every now and then. Anyway, I guess Z and Miyoko knew how to get rid of these Donovan. Next time, it will be easier if only they won't upgrade into something new then Z and Miyoko will sure be in trouble. Talking about strategy. Anyway, here's your 5...
animegal12 at 7:46PM, Feb. 11, 2007
well, at least one of the soldiers had some spirit in him... that was a lame joke. don't hurt me!! *runs away like a mouse from a cat* jk
EmilyTheStrange at 6:48PM, Feb. 11, 2007
Poor guy..... O_o;
JillyFoo at 6:27PM, Feb. 11, 2007
i like it. good dialogue.
magickmaker at 4:32PM, Feb. 11, 2007
Aw, I feel kinda bad for it now, even though it's an evil spirit-y thing. And still fairly creepy. The drawings seem to be a bit off, but still pretty freaking good! Your linework came through really well and you did an uber-good job with the faces. The only thing that seems rushed at all in the heads, which are a little thin,but that is so perfectly understandable. You are under a lot of pressure, after all. It's okay that you missed an update. It's okay to do that once and a while. So, yeah. Good job.
Jashiku at 4:05PM, Feb. 11, 2007
OH darn i missed updates! 0_0 ohh but poor donovan.
Tantz_Aerine at 3:44PM, Feb. 11, 2007
This page is very dramatic. I don't see why you don't like it. The transformation into shadow form comes across really well in this page. Also, Z looks somewhat matured and hurt in panel one. I was also slightly scared in the last panel that the shadowy tentacles were about to do something to Z, like suck out his energy or something, but apparently this is not what you had in mind. It is really excellent that you take the time and give the Donovan different personalities. It makes says and is the natural thing. I like it :) I am skeptical about feeling sorry about them. After all, they are evil beings. Unless they were cornered into being what they are, I am not sure where sympathy can come into the equation. They can't be good if they are bad. Grey is another matter altogether ;) I am wondering now, if there would be any chance for a Donovan to denounce evil... hm. There's a thought. Heh heh heh. E-mail a main character and ask him questions? Now who would think of that, I wonder? Heheh. Check again next week, and I may have a link for you ;) Very well done, dramatic page this one, and don't look down on it!
pv_chan at 3:33PM, Feb. 11, 2007
i think it looks really good, no white spaces that look out of place or anything really good composition over all and nice story boarding ability :D ~PV
x_eko_x at 3:21PM, Feb. 11, 2007
Wah! I was so busy chasing the Donovan I forgot to rate! XD
x_eko_x at 3:20PM, Feb. 11, 2007
*blinks* RAWRGGG! You Bitch! *chases after shadow with shotgun* Oh, and I ment the Donovan, not you.
Glass_Ink at 3:15PM, Feb. 11, 2007
Why didn't he just bring a test tube with him?