# 129
The Satoshi on Feb. 19, 2010
Usually if Sareana wasn't in a good mood she'd just let Lynette beat the tar out of her and maybe step in when it was most conveiniant for her and keep Lynnette from killing her…
Okay… I still have deep passion of pure unfiltraited hatred for vampires… but even I felt bad for Lynette in this page… there was going to be another page where Sareana kicks her while she's down but… I lost the page and even though I made a back up scan of it that means I can't erase junk… and I'm lazy… that and I've been crazy busy with the next chapter and the special extra that will be published in the book along with homework and I just said screw it…
The Satoshi at 4:09PM, March 11, 2010
Why does every one think that she's her archfoe...? She isn't even on Sareana's radar... Sareana is just giving Lynette shit for trying to eat Tevy...
mideviler at 3:46PM, March 11, 2010
yes, but it's her story and she's the one drawing it. there is a line between constructive criticism and pushing your opinion on it. learn that line cause you are stepping on it if not over it
anonymous at 7:47AM, March 8, 2010
Its okay if she hates vampires, I just wish she would portray Lynette more realistically. Lyn is supposed to be Sareana's archfoe, someone she's been fighting for centuries but unable to kill. Lyn should not be so easy for Sareana to defeat, and Sareana should not win every engagement, especially when its clear she was the one in the wrong this time. Stories become boring when an epic rivalry becomes completely one sided, i.e. if we come to expect Lyn to get her ass kicked in an embarrassing way each time they meet then its just no fun at all. She should get the better of Sareana every now and again to keep things interesting, and also to prevent Sareana from becoming a Mary Sue, AKA main character who can do no wrong, suffer no consequences of her actions, or be beaten)
captainclover at 1:11PM, March 4, 2010
aw, i wanted to know what happened when they went out for blood... er.. i mean, coke. haha. i loved that joke, btw. great action and blood splatter on this page! and fyi, i rate a 5 because i think it deserves a 5. :)
mideviler at 9:51PM, March 2, 2010
oh and for everyone that complained of satoshi hate of vampires. it's her opinion and nothing you say or suggest to change it won't change her opinion > > she's quite stubborn
mideviler at 9:49PM, March 2, 2010
> > should I comment on the comments left...F*** YES. dragondeathlord- your critique was nice. your dickery and, for lack of a better word which I detest using, argument/debate you were trying for was as pointless as probably your understanding of the inner workings of rhetoric. satoshi-HIIII. guess what...I'm getting a puppy! oh and possibly go into depth on your main characters more. I know you have ideas and bio backgrounds that can be tied in and you should know that toooo.
shaneronzio at 10:23AM, Feb. 23, 2010
Ouch!
Warriorking4ever at 10:04PM, Feb. 22, 2010
Ugh...Don't get me wrong, I like Sareana and all, but if Lynette is going to be her arch rival she should not be so easy for Sareana to defeat. All the best rivalries in comics and literature take place between people of similar skill & strength levels. Its no fun if one rival wins every conflict without fail. In short, to make Lynette more believable as Sareana's rival, she should be able to outwit or overpower Sareana every once and a while to keep things interesting, Lyn's too interesting to be merely a punching bag character who's there to get her ass kicked like Waspinator from Beast Wars or Kenny from South Park. Also, I really felt bad for Lyn this page since she meant no actual harm to that girl this time around...So basically I was expecting HER to do the pounding (and justly so). P.S. while I agree that books and films like Twilight have totally ruined the image of vampires, I still like those undead bloodsuckers & all the good stories out there focusing on them. Originality is good, but classics never die (as long as ya don't try to make them sparkle >_< )
piercedfox at 8:04PM, Feb. 22, 2010
Oh snap~! Discard your family, your friends, your blood - but always protect your slaves. Kendra's totally Sareana's b-otch! X3 Btw - Lynette got her vamp ass pwned.
piercedfox at 8:02PM, Feb. 22, 2010
Oh snap~! 3>
ASS0RTED CANDiES at 11:43AM, Feb. 22, 2010
Holy snap that was brilliant! OwO
The Satoshi at 10:59AM, Feb. 22, 2010
LOL Oh Jack you make me laugh... Really? To be honest I haven't put much time into her at all and she she slightly sterotypical... Infact I only put a third of the time comming up with her than I did comming up with Charisse... Though I haven't yet gone into depth with most of the more common characters yet... but sense Lynnette is a minor character I tried to but all the depth of her in now sense since she'll probably not be showing up again any time soon if at all...
wicked jack at 10:25AM, Feb. 22, 2010
you hate vampires? i love them! there my faverite, they have such fun screams when they die >:>
Dragondeathlord at 7:29AM, Feb. 22, 2010
Do not get me wrong, The rest of your cast are very interesting but Lynette steals the Spotlight.Threw are hate Has nothing to do with her being a Vampire. She a Highschool Snotty s**thead who had her first real feeling in her life.Sareana lonely and you expect it from her to go nuts for anther person but Lynette? Who would expect her to be human she a highschool snot.Stake em all and burn them. Spoiled shallow kids that is.Being a Vampire the very least of her sins.Yet she tried to learn sign language and improve and got kicked in the gut for it (or in her case her gut torn out) Sareana very cool but like it or not Lynette's her Rival becouse you do hate her.And she's the embodiment of that hate and rivalry already in your mind.Classic monster vs Original creation. Sorry Your subconscious betrays you and doing it's own writing therapy.
Dragondeathlord at 7:11AM, Feb. 22, 2010
Yep your point?Sherlock Holmes was meant for less than 3 books Sir Arthur Conan Doyle hated him. And Hannibal Lecter, M.D.by Thomas Harris was meant for one appearance in read dragon made Harris feel sick writing him,naruto manga the writer mad it clear He hate writing the big headed flat chested girl that was meant to be killed off (sakura as he described her) thats why she is flat chest big headed forhead and has no back story she took over his manga Manga like cancer.Even did a issue wear Naruto was screaming that she was stealing his Manga. Hate is passion. Sorry your screwed Lynnette intresting and not 2d.She like every mean snotty spoiled kid you ever met (I know one personally that I would like to run over with the car)and you made us feel sorry for her even your self. Think about that. Right now most fans can barely remember the rest of your cast. She here to stay in are minds she like this interesting scab you miss when it heals. But she is interesting.Your hate made her so.
The Satoshi at 1:45AM, Feb. 22, 2010
W-What.... I didn't put that much time into her at all... Infact... I probably put about less than a third of the time I put in Charisse into comming up with the character for Lynette... Just haven't gotten into to Charrisse much yet... or Kendra for that matter... But... I send alot of hours in a hypnotic state comming up with this shit any way...
Dragondeathlord at 1:19AM, Feb. 22, 2010
If Lynette meant to be a punching bag that was you first mistake as it would explain why she so well written you poured to much personality into her. She was written better than nearly anyone I've seen written in a long time.Certainly better than lot of the modern Vampire trash but also better than lot of none vampire Character. Your hate made her to real.Your very dislike made write better.And that's very cool.
The Satoshi at 11:42PM, Feb. 21, 2010
*sigh* All of you guys think that I hate vampires based on the fact of crappy stories.... Yeah they're crappy but you don't get it... MAYBE IT IS CAUSE I'M AUTISTIC THAT YOU ARE NOT UNDERSTANDING ME SO I'LL TRY TO MAKE THIS VERY CLEAR... Out off that the animals creatures from mythology and cryptzoology every time... EVERY F&^#*& time you know what authors choose for a story base... vampires... werewolfs... and F*&$&@ greek mthyology which greek mythology is mostly crap to me already sense a good part of it was ripped off from egypt during the transition between the two cultures... Vampires are just the epicenter of this repitional crap thanx to having to watch the first twilight peice of vomit!!! For once I'd like to see a book about a lil' Sekhmet demon that creates havock or a story about the Ogopogo! That would kick ass! Or maybe a story abot one of the Loa from the Guede family! BUT NOO!!!! VAMPIRES... WEREWOLFS... AND F@$&*!) GREEK MYTHOLOGY!!! And 2nd... I don't know if you read this before but I wrote much earlier that Lynette was sapose to be a one time character she was never competition for Sareana! She was ment as a punching bag to get out all my anxt toward this crap!!!
Dragondeathlord at 11:09PM, Feb. 21, 2010
PS I give 1 when there earned just as I give 5 and 2 3 4. Manny people here complained about the page and gave you a 5 anyway they wear not being helpful. I like your writing hence I bothered to post and rate the page as a 1 that it earned ,Now do better.
Dragondeathlord at 10:55PM, Feb. 21, 2010
Scarena Just got dull sorry I thought we see a true rival in Lynette in stead we see a punching bag. Your making a classic mistake in writing making your main creation top dog (the death sentence for any serial) for very at the expense of your supporting cast . Villain or a rivals more important than a main protagonist. In addition your complaint about vampire is well a musician saying he got a bad instrument. A instrument that played well for manny writers for more than 300 years. I personally hate modern film Vampire going back 80 years to Nosferatu. Give me a Carmilla by Joseph Sheridan Le Fanu 1872 or a Dracula or A Varny for a real scare. Lynette, Sareana are your babies but they both you creation and disservice for one is disservice to both. For the record Dracula was rapist immune to sunlight and hardly romantic.If you hate Vampire storys you need to read the classics and stop blaming bad authors and bad storys on the content. Or do you believe for one moment that Bram Stoker and Joseph Sheridan Le Fanu not to mention James Malcolm. Wear Unimaginative Emos? Insult any author you will but please leave those author out of your unfair Generalization. They wear the fathers of Gothic horror READ THEM!!! p.s. (that sunlight thing was a movie addon)And most had no fangs or a mouth full of Shark like teath. Unless they wear in the form of a Gaint Spider,or snake like Carmilla they did not leave cute little punctures. Dracula turns into a man sized Lizard with wings (a dragon)
Emeraldas at 10:14PM, Feb. 21, 2010
Vampires really can be pretty cool. If you try some more traditional vampires. I recommend reading "The Silver Kiss" by Annette Curtis Klause to give you a new perspective on them. In any case this is a great page. Through all the blood and gore, I can't help but laugh at Sareana's way of handling things.
KarmikCykle at 7:32PM, Feb. 21, 2010
Sareana wins! Flawless victory.
Ranze Jini at 12:14PM, Feb. 21, 2010
Why on earth would anyone give you a 1?! how mean. The goor is what I look forward too *evil grin*
Drakanor Dream at 6:47AM, Feb. 21, 2010
sorry a day late there Satoshi I wonder who Lynette will drain next after she regenerates her intestines...
cb_91 at 7:28PM, Feb. 20, 2010
Poor Lynette, even the vampire deserves love sometime. Except the ones from twilight. I really wish the wolves would eat them.