File sheet
domja on Oct. 5, 2008
Ok so it has come to our attention that we have not made it clear enough who everyone is or what they are. So I made a file sheet with basic information on each character. I hope this makes things alittle clearer for everyone. More pages will come as soon as my writer gives me some to work on. Other than that I hope you all enjoy.
harkovast at 9:22AM, Jan. 22, 2009
I noticed that the troll does not get a job, just a race. Is being a troll so freakin awesome that no more is required? I feel a bit sorry for the dead guy, he doesn't even get his name listed!
fladam at 8:12AM, Oct. 13, 2008
I do like your art work, really I do, having scanned the art through (without reading the text) I was able to follow most of the action. My only crit is that some of the panels feel perhaps too empty whereas others feel fuller and more considered. I'm sure when the colour is applied, the blank spaces will feel less vacant. This is NO reflection on your ability to draw, as it is at a very high standard. I speak to you as a fellow artist. Your artwork is excellent which is why I'm commenting on it moreso than the story which I have yet to read. You DO have great skills with layout and character design and I would like to see you fill out those panels a little more. Too much space where there isn't any text feels vacuous in my opinion. This comment is a general summary of all your art thus far. I have faved you and look forward to this comics future.