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grobles63 on Sept. 8, 2009
It's still Wednesday!!!These pages are starting to lose the cartoony feel I was trying for. I don't know if I should just let it evolve or strive to get back to what I intended.
grobles63 on Sept. 8, 2009
It's still Wednesday!!!These pages are starting to lose the cartoony feel I was trying for. I don't know if I should just let it evolve or strive to get back to what I intended.
parkbenchbook at 6:17AM, Sept. 12, 2009
3rded. Let it evolve.
Lemniskate at 2:34AM, Sept. 12, 2009
Evolve. That panel 3 is very wacky, with the inversed panel order... even the arrow doeasn't really save it...
repoman at 10:00PM, Sept. 9, 2009
My vote: let it evolve. I like the cartoony stuff but I also like this stuff so do what feels best, in my humblest of opinions.