king - no english I just don't speak japanese and I forgot to put the english in bold. thanks for reminding me.
Ink - thanks for the advice:) and I'm not really a comic artist this is just a hobby and the first time I'm actually doing it. funny thing is I do have an Adobe program but it keeps closing on me so I use a picture program. the whhole comic is sopossed to be light and airy plus the sex and beach comes later.
Have you considered using a straight-edge on the panel borders? They're fairly easy to find, and shouldn't be too much extra trouble. Ideally I'd recommend putting a gutter between panels too, but you're not going to suffer greatly for it.
Also, I'd recommend getting a less jagged font. When I first looked at the page, I thought the first word balloon was coming from a robot or something. I recommend finding something at blambot.com (since it's built toward comics and all). Though I suppose the real problem is whatever program you're using to add the text. I'm guessing MS Paint? You should look into a good imaging program, like one of the Adobe programs or maybe GiMP.
Anyway, I like the body language in this; keeps things looking nicely natural. I also like the soft coloring style; gives everything a sort of cute edge (though I have to admit, I was expecting a completely different comic with a name like "Sex on the Beach").
KawaiiKewti at 4:25PM, Aug. 1, 2006
Wow! It's so cool! And cute!
Sex on the Beach at 12:07PM, Aug. 1, 2006
king - no english I just don't speak japanese and I forgot to put the english in bold. thanks for reminding me. Ink - thanks for the advice:) and I'm not really a comic artist this is just a hobby and the first time I'm actually doing it. funny thing is I do have an Adobe program but it keeps closing on me so I use a picture program. the whhole comic is sopossed to be light and airy plus the sex and beach comes later.
Inkmonkey at 10:20AM, Aug. 1, 2006
Have you considered using a straight-edge on the panel borders? They're fairly easy to find, and shouldn't be too much extra trouble. Ideally I'd recommend putting a gutter between panels too, but you're not going to suffer greatly for it. Also, I'd recommend getting a less jagged font. When I first looked at the page, I thought the first word balloon was coming from a robot or something. I recommend finding something at blambot.com (since it's built toward comics and all). Though I suppose the real problem is whatever program you're using to add the text. I'm guessing MS Paint? You should look into a good imaging program, like one of the Adobe programs or maybe GiMP. Anyway, I like the body language in this; keeps things looking nicely natural. I also like the soft coloring style; gives everything a sort of cute edge (though I have to admit, I was expecting a completely different comic with a name like "Sex on the Beach").
King Reaper at 10:14AM, Aug. 1, 2006
Funny how much english they speak in a japanese school.
Chelano at 9:08AM, Aug. 1, 2006
hah cute