Chapter 5 - Page 14
DAJB on Feb. 24, 2008
Well, there it is - the last page of this chapter! And I know most of you clever types have already worked out exactly who Boo is but - for anyone who hasn't - that's your last clue right there in Panel 6! (Oh, and don't worry if you haven't guessed yet. We're going to tell you in the next chapter anyway!)
Reminder: Oh, and if you didn't check out the BVC Scrap Book at the weekend, we posted the last page of my childhood travesty DajbDevil on Friday. Yes, the whole comic is now online … (Sorry about that!)
CoyoteLongshot at 10:40PM, March 9, 2008
Heh heh... Nice way to close off the chapter.
thip at 5:18AM, March 1, 2008
"Bedlam", is it. One can understand why even Boo seems worried - and why the Shaman might be just what the doctor ordered ;o)
DAJB at 8:14AM, Feb. 26, 2008
Tantz: Alerters ain't what they used to be! And the chariot's on its way ... JNP: No fees. But you can still get a parking ticket!
Tantz_Aerine at 8:02AM, Feb. 26, 2008
Waa?? I missed this update! How utterly despicable of the alerter not to alert me! I like the way this page flows, by the way- and I am expecting to see what she means by chariot. ;)
JustNoPoint at 6:00AM, Feb. 26, 2008
No fees for chariots! Great ender!
DAJB at 11:24PM, Feb. 25, 2008
jgib: Surprising there aren't more around, really ...! ;-) JMT: Oh, they interact well. Remember the Shaman's comment: [url=http://www.drunkduck.com/Shades/index.php?p=295889]"Boo and I go back a long way ..."[/url]? Scotty: I'm beginning to see a pattern emerging from these last few pages. All you need for a successful comic, apparently, are chariots and scones! Harry: So I'd heard ...! ;-) Space: She'd eat you alive, Mr Hamster! ;-) Trevor: Heh - don't we all! one/Beretta/Terry: Thanks, guys!
jgib99 at 8:11PM, Feb. 25, 2008
Yes. Chariots rule!! So much better than mopeds.
jmt at 6:08PM, Feb. 25, 2008
I can't wait to see Red and the Shaman interacting with each other. I also hope the kid is okay. He looks a litle pissed in that last frame.
scottyduke at 5:32PM, Feb. 25, 2008
If chariots were optional, who wouldn't want to own one? :) Great page!
harryq at 5:17PM, Feb. 25, 2008
I like red tressed babes with chariots.
spacehamster at 2:44PM, Feb. 25, 2008
Somehow she seems to keep getting hotter as the pages progress.
trevoramueller at 11:19AM, Feb. 25, 2008
I want a chariot....
one_am at 9:40AM, Feb. 25, 2008
super fantastic.
DAJB at 8:23AM, Feb. 25, 2008
seventy2: Absolutely! Ark/Midge: Bedlam, here, isn't directly linked to the asylum but obviously the name is meant to conjure up images of reckless insanity. Plus, the name has a particular resonance for me because I was born in Bethnal Green, a part of the East End where the lunatics from Bedlam were paraded for the amusement of the public. (Not in my lifetime, you understand!) The name "Bethnal" is in fact derived from Bedlam. Midge: Thanks, from both of us! Keeping the dialogue "real" in the face of increasingly "unreal" developments, was very much the challenge I set myself! cs3: Thanks! Abt: So do I. Boo's hair just seems to light up every page she's on!
seventy2 at 8:05AM, Feb. 25, 2008
if it aint broke dont fix it. (in regards, to the chariot)
Arkdelta at 7:48AM, Feb. 25, 2008
Oh dear, that's not "Bedlam" as in the infamous insane asylum is it? I mean I knew these guys were bad news, but a cult centered around an insane asylum sounds like the recklessly dangerous doomsday fanatic kind of evil organization, and there always ~so~ hard to negotiate with. On the other hand, I hear that institution's got an excellent reputation these days.
TheMidge28 at 7:45AM, Feb. 25, 2008
fantastic! The Cult of Bedlam...hmmm.... interesting. I the down to earth tone of your writing is what I find most impressive DAJB. You do such a great job writing this story and making it feel real even if the elements seem so out there. ans Harsho does great too!
Abt_Nihil at 5:39AM, Feb. 25, 2008
Love the way Harsho colors Boo's hair... oh, and the way he colors Stan here looks great too... but hurtful :-)
DAJB at 4:43AM, Feb. 25, 2008
Peipei: Well, you know what they say about a chariot ... If you've got it, flaunt it. (At least I [i]think[/i] they were talking about a chariot!) ;-) Symon: Yeah, I've put my foot in it a few times. I often make a casual Smart Alec remark (you may have noticed!) only to find I've accidentally given away the next page's big surprise! When will I ever learn?! Albone: Amped up? All the way to eleven, Mr A.!
Peipei at 4:34AM, Feb. 25, 2008
Bah! I would use a chariot too in a time like this xD Boo just doesn't seem like a taxi person to me lol Chariots fit her better :p
SympleSymon at 4:19AM, Feb. 25, 2008
Looks great, and I gave up guessing, as it tends to annoy folks when I get it right and spoil their intended surprises. Magnificent chapter!
albone at 4:02AM, Feb. 25, 2008
Wa-hoo, great ending to this chapter. I'm thinking things are going to be amped up next chapter. Really, chariot riding is so much more sophisticated than Taxi riding.
DAJB at 3:10AM, Feb. 25, 2008
DocShadow: Thanks. And, yeah - I thought a final [i]big[/i] clue was in order before we went public! Milky: Heh - when I ran this at my own site, I threatened to ban people who used that term! ;-) SoItBegins: Thanks. I'll let you know how things progress on that front.
Doctor Shadow at 2:32AM, Feb. 25, 2008
Great ending to the last chapter and I kind of worked out from the 'chariot' bit :)
Milky at 1:24AM, Feb. 25, 2008
The Boo-Mobile, baby!