ok to be i have to say a couple of things and there all to make you comic better. to start off you suck. not fucking suck just suck. ( i started at fucking suck so be glad) you need text bubbles because no one can read it. you need to take time in going in the story or else you be done in what 50 pages. also do not stuff so much to one panel it looks bad. also make the panels easy to tell were there are. lastly if you are going to have some one like bowser go into his super form. but cant make giga bowser then call it something esle. pluse he does not fit on the panel i know he sopose to be big but come on there is a limit you know. and you other guy for his super for it should not just be him bigger with flames around him that looks really dumb. o and i just read that you made this 5 years ago. i hope you did better later on
omegarizor at 12:35PM, March 29, 2008
Ya,thanks for reminding me of how bad I was in season 1, Season 2's kind of the same but more clearer...
sonic2005 at 8:50PM, March 28, 2008
ok to be i have to say a couple of things and there all to make you comic better. to start off you suck. not fucking suck just suck. ( i started at fucking suck so be glad) you need text bubbles because no one can read it. you need to take time in going in the story or else you be done in what 50 pages. also do not stuff so much to one panel it looks bad. also make the panels easy to tell were there are. lastly if you are going to have some one like bowser go into his super form. but cant make giga bowser then call it something esle. pluse he does not fit on the panel i know he sopose to be big but come on there is a limit you know. and you other guy for his super for it should not just be him bigger with flames around him that looks really dumb. o and i just read that you made this 5 years ago. i hope you did better later on