12. Only want to be shot once
skybeast on Aug. 11, 2007
Well I followed EvilCowSlayer advice and made the panels bigger and I changed the text boxes.
So is it better or worst…
Shadow and Sonic
skybeast on Aug. 11, 2007
Well I followed EvilCowSlayer advice and made the panels bigger and I changed the text boxes.
So is it better or worst…
dragon Shraa_tak at 1:25AM, Nov. 2, 2007
New speach bubbles? AND SONIC DOESNT KNOW HOW TO USE A FORK?
slayer the hedgehog at 9:49AM, Aug. 16, 2007
OMG!!! New effects huh? Nice
EvilCowSlayer at 6:18PM, Aug. 12, 2007
This is quite an improvement. Lack of a comma in Panel 3, but the overall grammar has improved by leaps and bounds. I like the emboss effect you did on the text bubbles, it's quite unique. It looks especially good when it's a thought bubble. I notice, however, that your speech bubble tails don't share in the glory. Panel size looks good. Room enough for everything and allows good pacing. Keep up the good work.
DragoonX at 3:43PM, Aug. 12, 2007
This looks really good =D