Take what I say with a grain of salt. I'm making the kind of comments I wish people would make about my work. I'd like to see you do well on DD just like I'd like to do well, but some times I'm just saying something to say something.
You might want to go a size up with those letters and make them darker.
I'm finding this hard to read, and I have very good vision.
I know you've looked a Jonny before so you've seen how my lettering changed over time. You should take note of that, because great art work doesn't replace legible words.
faustus112 at 1:22PM, June 19, 2011
Your critiques motivate me to do better so don't give it a second thought, Ice.
Ice 9 at 3:04PM, June 16, 2011
Take what I say with a grain of salt. I'm making the kind of comments I wish people would make about my work. I'd like to see you do well on DD just like I'd like to do well, but some times I'm just saying something to say something.
faustus112 at 12:00PM, June 13, 2011
Will do.The next page is also hard to read but I'll darken the lettering after that.
Ice 9 at 2:05PM, June 12, 2011
You might want to go a size up with those letters and make them darker. I'm finding this hard to read, and I have very good vision. I know you've looked a Jonny before so you've seen how my lettering changed over time. You should take note of that, because great art work doesn't replace legible words.