Z74 on Oct. 3, 2016

I have been working on this idea for a while now and I decided to post it here mainly to get feedback and constructive crits from everyone. I have learned a lot through my experimentation on Starknights and wanted to sort of put it all together in a new comic.
This is an idea and story I have had for a long time and i plan to print this as a mini because I am old school and always wanted to see something I did in book form, I will be continuing with starknights as well so I don't know how often this will update. Please let me know what you all think and where I can improve, I guess I'm hoping to use you guys as my editorial staff so to speak but I really do value your opinions - Thanks!
This page is is a character called Dani - I can't tell you too much about her now (no spoilers!) I'll probably post some more characters and settings art before the story starts up !