Love the comic. Colors are interesting. I wish you could spell check your words prior to pasting them up ... "Shes" "She's" "Sheesh..." But I'm a grammar Nazi ... my bad. Keep up the posting!
Hell yeah awsome book good art amazing dialouge although i agree speech/thought bubbles need work but if that is worst thing i can say about comic then u rock. Maybe best ive ever seen on web but ill wait for a few more updates to go totally ga ga til then make mine darkchamber.
Your characters need to take more breaths; most of your dialogue runs together because there isn't enough punctuation. Art is good, textboxes need some work.
The art is great. I really love the colouring and the graphic design of the imagary in general!
-Some of the porportions are off though, but I can't talk ^_^
-The speach/thought bubbles and font style are a bit crappy. Text boxes/bubbles and fonts are a huge part of the presentation of a page, the quality of the look of them should match the high quality of the art.
Anyway, good looking story!
harkovast at 8:07AM, Jan. 10, 2009
I am amused to see what sort of horrible fate this guy is about to suffer.
oneminutecomics at 11:46PM, Aug. 2, 2007
your skills are insane! Wrioter and artist? both are awesom!
Azaeziel at 9:39AM, March 23, 2007
Swweeeeet!
Dark Chamber at 8:18PM, Jan. 5, 2007
Yes I will be updating soon!I am lettering the next 3 pages ,like right now!I promise to make prettier word balloons as well. :)
Green_Tangerine at 4:13PM, Jan. 5, 2007
Planning on updating this anytime soon?
Dark Chamber at 4:02PM, Jan. 4, 2007
Got balloons?
Hariku at 7:59PM, Dec. 22, 2006
For gods sake man, get photoshop and get some real chat bubbles.
magickmaker at 2:49PM, Dec. 19, 2006
Awesome artwork. It sounds like you have a very intriguing story on your hands.
Convarion at 12:21PM, Dec. 18, 2006
yes this is somethin i will keep up on i like everything about it. Keep it going and youll keep me reading. 2 thumbs up
DMFox at 3:12PM, Dec. 15, 2006
Very nice. I like where this is going. Love your artwork.
Skilledfingerz at 4:15AM, Dec. 11, 2006
Hmm... Yours colors are .... haunting. Adds a lot to the whole effect Props
jgib99 at 8:08AM, Dec. 9, 2006
Great stuff so far. Love the artwork.
shaneronzio at 9:33AM, Dec. 8, 2006
wow, man. this is looking like a cool story. I'll be reading.
Mr Mustard Seed at 8:12PM, Dec. 7, 2006
Love the comic. Colors are interesting. I wish you could spell check your words prior to pasting them up ... "Shes" "She's" "Sheesh..." But I'm a grammar Nazi ... my bad. Keep up the posting!
WingNut at 12:29PM, Dec. 7, 2006
Yes, I approve of this Idea. Nice comic by the way man! Very cool!
Kenders at 12:59PM, Dec. 4, 2006
Haha, awesome! Lovin' it so far. =) Oh, and you uh... muted yourself? Oo;;
lurch9944 at 6:56PM, Nov. 27, 2006
Good job, i dont like the whole cliff hanger thing though HURRY UP AND GET THE NEXT ONE UP!!!
lemmi at 11:51PM, Nov. 24, 2006
Hell yeah awsome book good art amazing dialouge although i agree speech/thought bubbles need work but if that is worst thing i can say about comic then u rock. Maybe best ive ever seen on web but ill wait for a few more updates to go totally ga ga til then make mine darkchamber.
slimredninja at 11:43PM, Nov. 24, 2006
awsome book wildly enteraining good amazing dialouge and pacing. You guys are practically pros.
KomradeDave at 9:03AM, Nov. 24, 2006
Your characters need to take more breaths; most of your dialogue runs together because there isn't enough punctuation. Art is good, textboxes need some work.
Ozoneocean at 4:50AM, Nov. 24, 2006
The art is great. I really love the colouring and the graphic design of the imagary in general! -Some of the porportions are off though, but I can't talk ^_^ -The speach/thought bubbles and font style are a bit crappy. Text boxes/bubbles and fonts are a huge part of the presentation of a page, the quality of the look of them should match the high quality of the art. Anyway, good looking story!
dracco at 1:24AM, Nov. 22, 2006
Nice job!