Some constructive critisism!
Firstly, i think you would add more depth to the comic if you put those musing words (your simply black pages) over the actual artwork, rather than a seperate page full of text. Otherwise, it looks like you're doing good, keep it up!
thats interesting. keep it up...ur story seems like its one of those deep comics. I am trying that too in my 1000 words comic but I dunno if its good enough..
Glitter_Fairie at 2:27AM, June 11, 2006
Not more black *sighs* I agree with elenawing, so what they do in parakiss, when she talks in the boxs? I know what I mean, lol!
elenawing at 1:30PM, June 4, 2006
Some constructive critisism! Firstly, i think you would add more depth to the comic if you put those musing words (your simply black pages) over the actual artwork, rather than a seperate page full of text. Otherwise, it looks like you're doing good, keep it up!
Uhs Feth Malorn at 1:21PM, June 4, 2006
Grr. This one's a bit short. But it's dramatic, huh? :p
chichi8839 at 12:24PM, June 4, 2006
thats interesting. keep it up...ur story seems like its one of those deep comics. I am trying that too in my 1000 words comic but I dunno if its good enough..