This comic's kinda interesting. But I have some suggestions:
1.) Make sure everything is spelled properly and that you use grammar and punctuation in your dialogue.
2.) Space the text farther apart from the borders of your speech bubbles. You don't do this often but it's still annoying when it is done. I'm not sure if you're already doing this, but type out the text first and then make the speech bubble. That way you have plenty of room for the text.
Also, if you're going to have this comic take place 30 years into the future from whenever. This means Sonic and his friends are in their forties and I'd like to see the effect of age in their sprites. I can understand if you just can't do this of course. So maybe back their age up a little bit? I mean, not many people wait until their late thirties to forties to have kids anyways.
Still, decent comic, favorited.
Zoom the Hedgehog at 1:15PM, April 25, 2011
This comic's kinda interesting. But I have some suggestions: 1.) Make sure everything is spelled properly and that you use grammar and punctuation in your dialogue. 2.) Space the text farther apart from the borders of your speech bubbles. You don't do this often but it's still annoying when it is done. I'm not sure if you're already doing this, but type out the text first and then make the speech bubble. That way you have plenty of room for the text. Also, if you're going to have this comic take place 30 years into the future from whenever. This means Sonic and his friends are in their forties and I'd like to see the effect of age in their sprites. I can understand if you just can't do this of course. So maybe back their age up a little bit? I mean, not many people wait until their late thirties to forties to have kids anyways. Still, decent comic, favorited.