[quote]ok, the thing is about the words in the speech bubble is that i followed what the tutorial said, BUT it wouldn't go white. and about the words, in the 5th panel, it went out, so i had to do that and when you said i got lazy in the sixth panel, that was the fifth, error on your part. I will work on the tails except some spots were hard to do[/quote]
Well, it SHOULD go white. My goes white, my friends turns white, don't understand why yours doesn't. Crap version of MS Paint? And please point out all five errors I have made thus far. And I'm glad you said you will work on tails. ^_^
[quote]oh by the way, i will use the "invert color" button for chaos control, so giving you a heads up
and
well, about the inverting, what else can i do for chaos control? I have looked and can't find anything else[/quote]
Ever used GIMP? Its a free image manipulation tool. Google it. It can supply you with lighting effects, blurs and the like that will improve your comic. Though stuff like Photoshop is much better for efects, it costs money, so try downloading GIMP, or Paintshop Pro.
[quote]what do you mean by "bit mixing"?[/quote]
Bit mixing is when the bit count of the sprites you use is different.
In this comic you used an Advance sprite with a Genesis sprite. Same with the last comic, Sonic was Advance style while Shadow was Genesis. Try to use all Advance style or all Genesis style. It will greatly improve the appearance of your comic.
ok, the thing is about the words in the speech bubble is that i followed what the tutorial said, BUT it wouldn't go white. and about the words, in the 5th panel, it went out, so i had to do that and when you said i got lazy in the sixth panel, that was the fifth, error on your part. I will work on the tails except some spots were hard to do
Ah, deleted past strips I see, good choice.
(Good)Backgrounds have made this comic seen so much better in general.
The colour coded text is not necessary with your speech bubbles. Use standard black and white. But your tails need work. Follow that tutorial I sent you awhile back and make sure to keep one tail straight and the other perfectly diagonal to connect to the bubble.
After reading the past comic and then this, it makes me wonder why your bit mixing. Stick to one version, not a little advance and a little something else, get what I'm saying?
I see you got lazy in the sixth panel. I can still see the inverted background through the speech bubble. Try to avoid inverting things, its really a bad effect...
Be sure to keep using capitals. Some sentences start with them, others don't.
Finally, be sure the bubble fits the text, so it doesn't run off or there isnââ¬â¢t a lot of white space left over...
I deem this four worthy. Needs a little work here and there, but it's going well.
Ridaz at 2:29PM, Nov. 20, 2008
how the hell is sonic freezing its oun chaos control?
VinceLikesRooster at 1:35PM, Sept. 28, 2007
ok, the next comic will have the invert color, but i will use Paintshop Pro for the next comic
VinceLikesRooster at 3:36PM, Sept. 27, 2007
by the way, about the sprites, the sprite i was using didn't have the sprite I WANTED to use, so i did that
VinceLikesRooster at 3:31PM, Sept. 27, 2007
my bad, 5th panel was where i went lazy, look a LITTLE bit closer
VinceLikesRooster at 3:30PM, Sept. 27, 2007
im not saying you have five errors, im saying that the stars in the speech bubble was in panel 6
Liaoriao at 2:15PM, Sept. 27, 2007
[quote]ok, the thing is about the words in the speech bubble is that i followed what the tutorial said, BUT it wouldn't go white. and about the words, in the 5th panel, it went out, so i had to do that and when you said i got lazy in the sixth panel, that was the fifth, error on your part. I will work on the tails except some spots were hard to do[/quote] Well, it SHOULD go white. My goes white, my friends turns white, don't understand why yours doesn't. Crap version of MS Paint? And please point out all five errors I have made thus far. And I'm glad you said you will work on tails. ^_^ [quote]oh by the way, i will use the "invert color" button for chaos control, so giving you a heads up and well, about the inverting, what else can i do for chaos control? I have looked and can't find anything else[/quote] Ever used GIMP? Its a free image manipulation tool. Google it. It can supply you with lighting effects, blurs and the like that will improve your comic. Though stuff like Photoshop is much better for efects, it costs money, so try downloading GIMP, or Paintshop Pro. [quote]what do you mean by "bit mixing"?[/quote] Bit mixing is when the bit count of the sprites you use is different. In this comic you used an Advance sprite with a Genesis sprite. Same with the last comic, Sonic was Advance style while Shadow was Genesis. Try to use all Advance style or all Genesis style. It will greatly improve the appearance of your comic.
VinceLikesRooster at 1:37PM, Sept. 27, 2007
well, about the inverting, what else can i do for chaos control? I have looked and can't find anything else
VinceLikesRooster at 1:35PM, Sept. 27, 2007
what do you mean by "bit mixing"?
VinceLikesRooster at 1:28PM, Sept. 27, 2007
oh by the way, i will use the "invert color" button for chaos control, so giving you a heads up
VinceLikesRooster at 1:27PM, Sept. 27, 2007
ok, the thing is about the words in the speech bubble is that i followed what the tutorial said, BUT it wouldn't go white. and about the words, in the 5th panel, it went out, so i had to do that and when you said i got lazy in the sixth panel, that was the fifth, error on your part. I will work on the tails except some spots were hard to do
Liaoriao at 11:48AM, Sept. 27, 2007
Ah, deleted past strips I see, good choice. (Good)Backgrounds have made this comic seen so much better in general. The colour coded text is not necessary with your speech bubbles. Use standard black and white. But your tails need work. Follow that tutorial I sent you awhile back and make sure to keep one tail straight and the other perfectly diagonal to connect to the bubble. After reading the past comic and then this, it makes me wonder why your bit mixing. Stick to one version, not a little advance and a little something else, get what I'm saying? I see you got lazy in the sixth panel. I can still see the inverted background through the speech bubble. Try to avoid inverting things, its really a bad effect... Be sure to keep using capitals. Some sentences start with them, others don't. Finally, be sure the bubble fits the text, so it doesn't run off or there isnââ¬â¢t a lot of white space left over... I deem this four worthy. Needs a little work here and there, but it's going well.