Epilouge
xX Shadolad Xx on Oct. 12, 2008
Master Chief is on a mission to stop the covernent from opening a portal to a complete different world.
Sprites by InnerRayg. I take no credit for sprites.
Sonic Meets Master Chief
xX Shadolad Xx on Oct. 12, 2008
Master Chief is on a mission to stop the covernent from opening a portal to a complete different world.
Sprites by InnerRayg. I take no credit for sprites.
XM0stLyGhOstLyX at 10:32AM, Nov. 2, 2009
Ohh, and BITMIXING ALERT. use you have 2 different sonics in here, see in panel 9&10 have 2 different sonics, ONLY use 1. P.S. that portal looks crappy, fix that up.
XM0stLyGhOstLyX at 10:29AM, Nov. 2, 2009
Meh.... 1:see cortana's head in the 8th panel? made me wanna barf, ONLY resize in 200%,300%,400% ect. 2:People DONT invite other people to stay it his house unless he's gunna rape him, try to warm up the story more, it looks like your trying to rush it.
xX Shadolad Xx at 7:37AM, Oct. 14, 2008
I get it i think... so the highest bubble is read first am i right?
BohemianBear at 1:40AM, Oct. 14, 2008
Your third panel, Unless I'm reading it wrong, the bottom word bubble should go above all the rest. Know what I am saying?
xX Shadolad Xx at 11:37PM, Oct. 13, 2008
Ok i understand all of that accept your last point what do u mean u read right to left?
BohemianBear at 2:50PM, Oct. 13, 2008
For a Paint comic- Looks pretty decent- But lets try two things in your next one -Spell checking -Directing your Speech balloons- Why not add an arrow in there so we know who's talking to who -Also- Fix up the speech balloons alittle too- We read right to left in North America -All in all, I'll give it a 3.
PokePanz123 at 1:40PM, Oct. 13, 2008
lol amazing so much for no cheesy bang or boom lol