Okay, here is how my rating works, you start with all 5 points, you can gain with stuff that impresses me, and lose points with stuff begginers do...
Okay, lets start with the negative...
-1 because the speed blurs don't look too good, but you will most likely improve.
-1 because of the color code text... Never do it... Sometimes it hurts peoples eyes, and therefore, they'll avoid reading comics by you...
-1 because of the tails, they should never be a line, they should be a triangle...
That leaves you with 3 points, now for the positive things!
-1 because of the tails, they should never be a line, they should be a triangle...
That leaves you with 3 points, now for the positive things!
+1 because you said it's your first comic, It's really well done!
+1 because you seem to already have personalities for the characters down, again really well done!
and let's see, Ah yes,
+1 for using special effects, though you could get better, I hope this stuff helps you out...
- Kitty Man
REDBLAST1 at 1:01PM, Aug. 1, 2007
Thanks, I made the first 6 already, but all use the info for the others
Kitty Man at 12:47PM, Aug. 1, 2007
Okay, here is how my rating works, you start with all 5 points, you can gain with stuff that impresses me, and lose points with stuff begginers do... Okay, lets start with the negative... -1 because the speed blurs don't look too good, but you will most likely improve. -1 because of the color code text... Never do it... Sometimes it hurts peoples eyes, and therefore, they'll avoid reading comics by you... -1 because of the tails, they should never be a line, they should be a triangle... That leaves you with 3 points, now for the positive things! -1 because of the tails, they should never be a line, they should be a triangle... That leaves you with 3 points, now for the positive things! +1 because you said it's your first comic, It's really well done! +1 because you seem to already have personalities for the characters down, again really well done! and let's see, Ah yes, +1 for using special effects, though you could get better, I hope this stuff helps you out... - Kitty Man