This is the final pt. in the awakening chapter. Mav has earned his ability from the wind avatar and is now sent on a new mission. Now to The Extreme Gear Grand Prix!!!
The character in my avi is a preview of one of my new characters reded. Im working on his action sheet right now. It will probably be done in a week so i have to put the comic on hold since im going to work him in chapter 2 the grand prix as one of the racers. What do you guys think of him?
I'm loving the dialogue, but you got a little 'teh' in there. Otherwise - especially on the last page - this is pretty good.
And also, the idea with Chapter Pages is to highlight the FIRST page of the chapter, so people have easy access points. Not every page in the chapter.
So, um...keep it up!
Quacklin at 12:47PM, Nov. 22, 2006
[color=red]hes nice [/color]
feralfox at 8:52PM, Nov. 21, 2006
The character in my avi is a preview of one of my new characters reded. Im working on his action sheet right now. It will probably be done in a week so i have to put the comic on hold since im going to work him in chapter 2 the grand prix as one of the racers. What do you guys think of him?
Quacklin at 3:30PM, Nov. 20, 2006
Are you adding any characters??
Desume at 9:16AM, Nov. 20, 2006
Hey when Am I going to appear eh Mav, well anyway great concept so far, just watch the grammer, unless its part of the gag.
feralfox at 8:35PM, Nov. 19, 2006
Thanks ill keep that in mind^_^
Twin at 8:30PM, Nov. 19, 2006
I'm loving the dialogue, but you got a little 'teh' in there. Otherwise - especially on the last page - this is pretty good. And also, the idea with Chapter Pages is to highlight the FIRST page of the chapter, so people have easy access points. Not every page in the chapter. So, um...keep it up!