the2pacfan47 at 6:58PM, Feb. 20, 2006

I didnt know it sucked that bad. And y do u all hate that many pannels... it's just as big as a lot of other sprites comics. Haven't you seen tony the hedgehog or gone to sonicwreks (Sprite comic series site)?

ComicMakerEX at 5:18PM, Feb. 20, 2006

AHHH!!! Too many panels in one row!

the2pacfan47 at 2:09PM, Feb. 20, 2006

Thanx for the suggestions... but its harder for me to change things when I dont have the best material. I would use photoshop as lefarce mentioned but I dont think I have that or could get that in the near future. I am going to take these suggestions in mind as I make my next comics... but since I already made my series up to comic 10 those changes won't take place until after that.

Angry_Young_Poor at 10:07AM, Feb. 20, 2006

Too many panels for this idea. Seems like there are two ideas going on. Why not make a comic 5 panels (or less) long and split the story up.

lefarce at 7:00AM, Feb. 20, 2006

forgive my poor grammer and spelling... just woke up...

lefarce at 6:59AM, Feb. 20, 2006

Lots of recolors in here... The text boxes are hard to read, about half of the text ran together making it difficult to read. And the character's were placed awkwardly. Pannel 17... well, I don't even know whats going on in there. It confused me, allot. The story just kept cutting from one random event to another making it hard to keep track, and the gutter's were very small... Overall, this could use allot of work. It seem's like you are using MS paint instead of photoshop. Make the switch. Use diffrent angles, be creative. Treat every pannel as it's own work of art instead of just rushing it all together. You have much to work on, but don't give up.