#7 Metal Madness
the2pacfan47 on Feb. 24, 2006
I'll say again these comics will not change and improve totally until 11.
The Story:
To sum it up, Shadows impatients and self centeredness lead him to ignore the warnings Tikal had given him and Sonic. After leavin, he ran into Metal Shadow. Shadow does not hesitate to fight but wants to fight at a more proper place. And Knuckles finds his way there only to run into Metal Knuckles.
As this is happening Dark Emeral is heading to control the Death Egg to crash into and destroy Earth!!! And this pisses off Eggman… and Dark.
liveordie at 5:21PM, Feb. 28, 2006
Not great. Not horrible. It's ok.
ComicMakerEX at 4:58PM, Feb. 25, 2006
What I meant ealier is that your panels are too wide. It looks like this is going to become better than the 1st few
Shyguy_Rising at 4:12PM, Feb. 25, 2006
Even reading your comment, it's still kinda hard to understand, and I don't like the use of MS Paint effects. The grammar could use a little work too. It's a good start though.
AdHocFerox at 9:36AM, Feb. 25, 2006
epic