Page #11

SnowTheHedgehog on March 25, 2012

Knuckles uses Jibe! It has absolute no effect!
Shadow uses Intelligence! It's super effective!

On another note: I'm so relieved. I was convinced the colored Shadow would be one big disastrophy (disaster + catastrophy), but it's bearable. And this time, the thing I kindly ask for response about is the panel layout. What do ya think about it? (And yes, Ink, I know the page number is misplaced again. ^_^')

Annunciation: I'm going to have some vacation on around Easter. And I decided I'll fix all pages I forgot something about, did something wrong, or don't like how they turned out. I already have these things on schedule:

- Catch up with my schedule
- Make a comic header (minor importance)
- Page #5: Add »Station Square, the next day« box in 1st panel
- Page #6: Draw proper BG for between speech bubble chain / Add one more tail to Ink's thought bubble in panel 2/ Redraw tree shadow in panel 3
- Page #7: Color Amy's »name box« / Add bags to panel 7
- Page #8: Delete »Prototype« (JPEG file) / Finish 1st speech bubble / Blacken sky / Finish grasslands / Add motion blurs to panels 6 and 8 / Add »Huh?«-effect to Amy at panel 5 (stupid effect name, I know but I have no idea how's it called, even in German; look up Page #9, Snow's 2nd expression and you know what I mean)
- Page #9: Add gloom to the moon
- 1 Year Celebration: Rewrite Author's sentences / Renew Modern Snow's face in the last panel
- Page #11: Add motion blurs to Knuckles in panel 2 / increase Shadow's black color

If you find other mistakes or something bothering you, write it into the comment box and I'll look forward to fix it.