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j giar on March 11, 2007

I deleted the orginal page and redid the dialogue…it's amazing that you can read and reread a script and still end up putting in shit dialogue…It's the whole forest a=from the trees thing…This has been altered to be less nail and chalk board like. I also re-edited pages yesterday to get them to the same size as the rest..sorry if any of you thought I was posting new stuff…But I'm posting new stuff now.