Okay, 1'd but I'll give some pointers
1. get better backgrounds next time
2. Do a story people can follow
3. Don't draw speech bubbles with a mouse. That's what the box tools are for. Also, sort them better
4. Don't come onto DD for a while so every one can forget this comic. On second though, just delete it
5. Spend more time on your pages. Look at other sprite comics, the popular ones and ask yourself 'What can I do to be like them without being a clone of them'
Please consider these suggestions I have given you or expect a lot of flaming in the future
Until next time
The Aussie Kid
Rich at 6:04PM, April 23, 2006
I got very drunk one time and made an ass out of myself. This kinda reminded me of it.
Aussie_kid at 5:38PM, April 23, 2006
Okay, 1'd but I'll give some pointers 1. get better backgrounds next time 2. Do a story people can follow 3. Don't draw speech bubbles with a mouse. That's what the box tools are for. Also, sort them better 4. Don't come onto DD for a while so every one can forget this comic. On second though, just delete it 5. Spend more time on your pages. Look at other sprite comics, the popular ones and ask yourself 'What can I do to be like them without being a clone of them' Please consider these suggestions I have given you or expect a lot of flaming in the future Until next time The Aussie Kid
Toonster at 2:02PM, April 23, 2006
not as shit as this comic
Mega Greg at 12:54PM, April 23, 2006
It better be over, cause this isn't good at all.