Seriously, mate. I can't stress it enough. DON'T QUIT. I hate it when people pull this garbage and get all high and mighty towards a new guy. I'll be your fan if you keep trying.
Hmph. Don't get discouraged by all the ones. You're new. People make mistakes. I'll gladly help you out with advice and stuff, but it'd be easier to talk outside of these comment boxes. You have AIM or anything? If you can PM me in the forums with some contact info, even an e-mail, I'll help you out.
NOW LISTEN!
Panels = crooked.
Sprites = DAMN they almost look 8 bit.
Light = What is that?
Text boxes = Not so good.
The joke was okay, but needs more work overall.
As I've said: http://bobandgeorge.com/Other/Guides/index.html
That is Bob and George, the first sprite comic ever created, and this is the link to the guides.
It WILL help.
You didn't read a word I typed, did you? Okay, first of all, the text bubbles look a little better, so I have to give you that. But your outline is a problem
Second, Samus is floating above the ground, I said keep them level
Third, Hold Shift when drawing a line to seperate panels.
Finally, get better backgrounds. Google if you must. I use http://bghq.com
There's more, but I don't have time
That's an stupid comic anyways, so nyah, Black Templar
anonymous
at 4:18PM, April 24, 2006
Is it supposed to have bad backgrounds,jokes that make no sense, and no plot at all because if so your doing a good job I don't know just not my kind of humor
BlackTemplar2 at 11:53AM, April 25, 2006
crack it?
Rydel6 at 8:42PM, April 24, 2006
You should download a demo of paint shop pro and then crack it.
Xergrim at 7:08PM, April 24, 2006
Seriously, mate. I can't stress it enough. DON'T QUIT. I hate it when people pull this garbage and get all high and mighty towards a new guy. I'll be your fan if you keep trying.
Xergrim at 7:06PM, April 24, 2006
Hmph. Don't get discouraged by all the ones. You're new. People make mistakes. I'll gladly help you out with advice and stuff, but it'd be easier to talk outside of these comment boxes. You have AIM or anything? If you can PM me in the forums with some contact info, even an e-mail, I'll help you out.
xHeh at 6:01PM, April 24, 2006
NOW LISTEN! Panels = crooked. Sprites = DAMN they almost look 8 bit. Light = What is that? Text boxes = Not so good. The joke was okay, but needs more work overall. As I've said: http://bobandgeorge.com/Other/Guides/index.html That is Bob and George, the first sprite comic ever created, and this is the link to the guides. It WILL help.
Aussie_kid at 5:33PM, April 24, 2006
You didn't read a word I typed, did you? Okay, first of all, the text bubbles look a little better, so I have to give you that. But your outline is a problem Second, Samus is floating above the ground, I said keep them level Third, Hold Shift when drawing a line to seperate panels. Finally, get better backgrounds. Google if you must. I use http://bghq.com There's more, but I don't have time
Champtim at 5:27PM, April 24, 2006
Dude, don't try to resize the sprites yourself, Press CTRL and W at the same time.
Toonster at 5:07PM, April 24, 2006
At least the punchline made sense
Ruko at 5:02PM, April 24, 2006
Um...... it's horiible. Better texboxes. Please make it to make sense.Better panels.
Heatgale17 at 4:57PM, April 24, 2006
forgot to rate 1
Heatgale17 at 4:54PM, April 24, 2006
That's an stupid comic anyways, so nyah, Black Templar
anonymous at 4:18PM, April 24, 2006
Is it supposed to have bad backgrounds,jokes that make no sense, and no plot at all because if so your doing a good job I don't know just not my kind of humor
Podunk U at 4:02PM, April 24, 2006
You improved slightly on the speech bubbles but this comic still needs a LOT more work. Try spending more time on it before you post.
Mega Greg at 3:33PM, April 24, 2006
NO!
Mimarin at 3:05PM, April 24, 2006
Say no to crap sprite comics.
Rob at 2:49PM, April 24, 2006
'cause it's crap.
BlackTemplar2 at 2:45PM, April 24, 2006
:( why do you all hate my comic!?
Rich at 2:41PM, April 24, 2006
Im not even gonna waste my time listing all the things wrong with this.
BlackTemplar2 at 2:40PM, April 24, 2006
Horray! a good reveiw!
Heatgale17 at 2:37PM, April 24, 2006
Bad Ideal for samus to shoot the Light.