SM-Ch001-p004
yadiel on Aug. 30, 2007
There are a lot of odd things about this page, but at the time (remember I have the whole chapter finished and working on second)it seemed ok, now that I look back at it, I don't know, I'm just not completely happy with it, but I promised I wouldn't redo past pages unless it was absolutely necesary =D
yadiel at 10:57AM, Sept. 4, 2007
thx Cain and Janen =D
Cain at 9:30AM, Sept. 4, 2007
Cool!!
Janen at 2:59PM, Aug. 31, 2007
Nice attention to details on the first panel. Wonder what will happen?
yadiel at 12:36PM, Aug. 31, 2007
Thx again giovanni, I'll add the warnign about how to read right away.
giovanni at 12:23PM, Aug. 31, 2007
the character feel less blocky here and the hand is very well done. maybe a bit more grey tones might help it look even more professionnal it seems youre very good a drawing scenery