SM-Ch001-p009
yadiel on Sept. 7, 2007
=D I think that with this page I really started improveing, I added some more shadows, and the side views I think I made them better.
Tha bad guys make an appearance =D. Little by little we will be hearing bits of whats going on, what happened, and why, for now, at least the first 3 chapters won't be so serious, not the the story will take an angs theme, but there should be more action from chapter 3 to the end. =D
By the way, if you got any critiq, or thing the page deserves a lower grade than 5, go ahead, I really want to improve, but for that I need your help =D, also there are some past pages without grades or comments, you could give them a crit to =D
Have fun and thx for reading.
yadiel at 12:48PM, Sept. 8, 2007
hahahah XD thx for the comments =D I really appreciate them =D, I did the design of this characters a lot of time after the main, I guess my art had the chance to evolve a bit.
Cain at 12:04PM, Sept. 8, 2007
ooh the Bad Guys!! more, more more! XD
stabbyfairy at 7:46AM, Sept. 8, 2007
I smell a [url=http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main.WhiteHairedPrettyBoy]White Haired Pretty Boy[/url]... XD For some reason, I prefer your character design for the bad guy to the ones for the main characters... But then I do quite like bishounen. *grin*