SM-Ch001-p011
yadiel on Sept. 21, 2007
We got another update just in time =D, I suck at doing water O_o I did at least 10 tries in this page, and what you see was the best one I could do =(. I need to practice it, becase I will have some important scenes with water in the future.
By the way, I added more info to the comixpedia entry, if anyone could check the grammar, I would really appreciate that =P.
thx a lot =D
Cain at 1:43PM, Sept. 26, 2007
hey! that's good!
dark link at 10:17AM, Sept. 24, 2007
i really hope this gets animated and put on TV in the future. i just read the whole comic, and your work is amazing. you're really good at drawing scenery. i wish i was as good as you...
ShinGen at 2:38PM, Sept. 23, 2007
Aww... that's cute. And very well drawn. I'm so glad I fav'd this. ^_^
Janen at 6:04PM, Sept. 22, 2007
Water is always fun.
yadiel at 1:47PM, Sept. 22, 2007
haha, yes I think all the lake comes from that waterfall, =P I really didn't think more on how that would be possible, but we could guess it's a really small lake, not deep enought to cover half the body of a couple of kids =P. thx for faving it =D
Rockster1039 at 1:03PM, Sept. 22, 2007
fav'd
magickmaker at 12:50PM, Sept. 22, 2007
...I like that water. Everybody looks really happy. The backgrounds look nice, but in the the first panel the waterfall looks a little inaccurate. Is the whole thing a lake that drains down that one small waterfall?
yadiel at 7:20AM, Sept. 22, 2007
O_o There was and incredibly big mistak in the page I originally uploaded =P fortunately it was easy to correct. About the frontpage =( I'm out of ideas, I'm really bad at designing websites or blogs or whatever =(, I really don't know what would fit with the webmanga. On a side note, starting from chapter 3, the reading order will change to left-to-right =D I guess that will make some ppl happy. I won't change the current pages, mostly because when I did a try, some panels had a really weir looking O_o. Like the first one of this page, Kernel pose looked extremely weird. Over all I'm happy with this page, but so far next week's page is my favorite. By the way, thx stabbyfaire for being the first to post
yadiel at 7:20AM, Sept. 22, 2007
O_o There was and incredibly big mistak in the page I originally uploaded =P fortunately it was easy to correct. About the frontpage =( I'm out of ideas, I'm really bad at designing websites or blogs or whatever =(, I really don't know what would fit with the webmanga. On a side note, starting from chapter 3, the reading order will change to left-to-right =D I guess that will make some ppl happy. I won't change the current pages, mostly because when I did a try, some panels had a really weir looking O_o. Like the first one of this page, Kernel pose looked extremely weird. Over all I'm happy with this page, but so far next week's page is my favorite.
stabbyfairy at 6:44AM, Sept. 22, 2007
Ugh, I forgot to comment on the water. It doesn't look too bad this page, if you want to improve maybe go to Google Image search and look up some pictures to use as references for how the water would move? That's how I learn to draw new stuff. There's also a tutorial on the DD tutorials feature about how to do water, but that's more about how to colour it in Photoshop.
stabbyfairy at 6:40AM, Sept. 22, 2007
Aaaah, they look so happy. ^_^ The font doesn't really seem to fit though. It's been bugging me for a few pages now. You need something with a more hand-drawn feel, I reckon.