I seem to be getting back into the loop of making comics again. Between Splash Damage every week and the Off Hours comic, my speed is going back up. Which is good.
Also, I want to make this comic better. We need criticism. I'm calling out all the real artists and writers out there who take the slightest glance at the comic. What can we do better?
@Bluey
thanks for those words of confidence. I don't see a spelling error in the first panel. if you're referring to Kyrah, that's just how we decided to spell her name. instead of Kyra.
Well I'm an artist and writer so...aside from a first panel spelling error the comic is sound and on to criticism. You make a good comic thats funny, intelligent and makes many references to pop and web culture which provide a wide range of viewers who will enjoy your comic and you can only get better and better. On the other hand Lynn's shadow could have been made more human shaped to give the feel that she was approaching and not a living fire.
Splash Damage at 8:55PM, Feb. 21, 2010
@Bluey thanks for those words of confidence. I don't see a spelling error in the first panel. if you're referring to Kyrah, that's just how we decided to spell her name. instead of Kyra.
Bluey at 4:45PM, Feb. 21, 2010
Well I'm an artist and writer so...aside from a first panel spelling error the comic is sound and on to criticism. You make a good comic thats funny, intelligent and makes many references to pop and web culture which provide a wide range of viewers who will enjoy your comic and you can only get better and better. On the other hand Lynn's shadow could have been made more human shaped to give the feel that she was approaching and not a living fire.