I agree with ReaperEX on some things. The grammer could use a little more work, and it mignt be helpful to outline your text boxes. However, I have to disagree with the way Reaper voiced his criticisms. Instead of suggesting changes to make the comic better, he has given commands out, saying that there's "alot wrong" with the comic. This comic has made many improvement since the first strip. It is insulting that Reaper insinuates that all the changes this comic has made to become better are not good enough. I understand that Reaper is an artist, and is gifted with an ability to make high quality sprite comics. He should not however expect everyone else to make the same quality work. Some spriters are not talented enough to make custom sprites. For this reason they use recolors. Some comics are going to rely on recolors, they should not be downgraded because of that. I ask that ReaperEX keep these things in mind next time he criticizes someone else's comic. It might keep that author from resenting him.
1. no recolors
2. no neon colors
3. maybe add an outline to your text boxes
4. Sentence Structure and grammar, while still pretty good, there are a few errors. Maybe try to sound out what you're going to say on this comic, 'cause some stuff don't make sense.
5. As for the last panel, connect any bubbles that one person speaks.
Sound effects are good, and the background's aren't half bad.
You don't get anything, since I found alot wrong. Fix these things and you'll have a worth-reading comic.
master nayr at 7:51PM, May 26, 2007
Comics okay. The colors on The W Lord are kinda bright. You might want to darken them a bit. Keep on working on the comic and you'll be alright.
master nayr at 7:49PM, May 26, 2007
I agree with ReaperEX on some things. The grammer could use a little more work, and it mignt be helpful to outline your text boxes. However, I have to disagree with the way Reaper voiced his criticisms. Instead of suggesting changes to make the comic better, he has given commands out, saying that there's "alot wrong" with the comic. This comic has made many improvement since the first strip. It is insulting that Reaper insinuates that all the changes this comic has made to become better are not good enough. I understand that Reaper is an artist, and is gifted with an ability to make high quality sprite comics. He should not however expect everyone else to make the same quality work. Some spriters are not talented enough to make custom sprites. For this reason they use recolors. Some comics are going to rely on recolors, they should not be downgraded because of that. I ask that ReaperEX keep these things in mind next time he criticizes someone else's comic. It might keep that author from resenting him.
ReaperEX at 6:57AM, May 23, 2007
1. no recolors 2. no neon colors 3. maybe add an outline to your text boxes 4. Sentence Structure and grammar, while still pretty good, there are a few errors. Maybe try to sound out what you're going to say on this comic, 'cause some stuff don't make sense. 5. As for the last panel, connect any bubbles that one person speaks. Sound effects are good, and the background's aren't half bad. You don't get anything, since I found alot wrong. Fix these things and you'll have a worth-reading comic.