Time for a good old review! =P
Your first problem is in panels one & three, the green hedgehog [b]isn't[/b] looking at Shadow & Knuckles, he is looking at us...
Your second problem is that in [b]every[/b] panel the characters keep moving around and arn't staying in the same spot...
Your third and final problem are the text boxes, it seems as if you did them in two seconds =P Try and make text boxes with [b]outlines[/b] and [b]a real tail[/b] to them and not just a line...
Thos are your problems that you should fix in futur issues.
Jessijuu at 7:49AM, May 28, 2007
Nice
Jak0070 at 1:54PM, May 27, 2007
Sweet!Umm...Cool fight no problems really.
Zero Wite at 3:07PM, May 26, 2007
okay thanks Flame and Kaze, I'll remember that next time
KazeFire at 1:22PM, May 26, 2007
I dunno about Flame but i think it is okay, despite all the thing he said. But yes, it does need work.
Zero Wite at 12:30PM, May 26, 2007
is it alright though?
Zero Wite at 12:29PM, May 26, 2007
Yeah...kinda rushed...
Flame the Hybrid at 11:23AM, May 26, 2007
Time for a good old review! =P Your first problem is in panels one & three, the green hedgehog [b]isn't[/b] looking at Shadow & Knuckles, he is looking at us... Your second problem is that in [b]every[/b] panel the characters keep moving around and arn't staying in the same spot... Your third and final problem are the text boxes, it seems as if you did them in two seconds =P Try and make text boxes with [b]outlines[/b] and [b]a real tail[/b] to them and not just a line... Thos are your problems that you should fix in futur issues.