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blade_rena on Aug. 3, 2008
i like delia. *shrug*
as a notveryinteresting author's note: i didn't want to make delia a dislike-able character. i didn't want to make her an obnoxious bitch who is yelly and abusive like you usually see in these situations, because then it would be like “WELL GEE NO WONDER HE DOESN'T WANNA REALLY BE WITH HER.”
she IS a little gloomy though, which makes jem reluctant to hurt her feelings.
chocolate_addict at 3:14AM, Aug. 7, 2008
I think you are doing a good job in making Delia like-able... I like her ;)
Twilight_of_the_gods at 5:49PM, Aug. 4, 2008
I think it's cool that you're making her like-able, it adds a whole new facet to the situation.
Fly Hue at 5:06PM, Aug. 4, 2008
I admire your motivation to make Delia a nice person.