Chapter 1 - Page 10
Kiah on Feb. 23, 2008
Any page involving Mia takes a bit longer to do. Whenever she's the main character of a page, you know some beat downs are going to occur. Figuring out how to show some of this stuff was a bit tough but I think it's obvious now.
I don't really like how boring the angles are but I couldn't show what I wanted to without them :(
leaving_a_comment at 11:40AM, Oct. 6, 2009
she knows how to kick ass
Annie2495 at 12:11AM, July 26, 2009
Gese a lu! She's awesome! I like how you do show some moments of weaknesses , though brief, it makes it more realisitic. Kudos to you!
giovanni at 5:16PM, Oct. 12, 2008
really strong girl she is the muscle of the team
luvtehcomix at 3:47PM, July 20, 2008
wait, did she just headbutt a zombie?! that alone constitutes a fav'!
simonitro at 12:53AM, March 31, 2008
HARDCORE AND HARD-HEAD!!!
CoyoteLongshot at 12:35AM, Feb. 26, 2008
That's just messy. Must be why she wears red all the time.
DAJB at 11:28PM, Feb. 24, 2008
Artwork is great. Keep it up!
TheMidge28 at 8:58PM, Feb. 24, 2008
sequence-wise there's some panels missing to understand the coat being pulled and then wrapped around the zombie...the art is beautiful though.
cs3ink at 8:19PM, Feb. 24, 2008
Storytelling-wise, this isn't my favorite page, but even considering that, this is a blast of a page.
JustNoPoint at 5:48PM, Feb. 24, 2008
Great page. Sorry for the lack of comments lately, got behind reading. Caught up and can't wait to see more! The only thing I would want with the action is for it to be a bit more dynamic. You draw the action fabulously mind you. I like energetic layouts and such. Though it makes it a lot more difficult to make a page when you have to think of the entire page as a scene instead of simply drawing individual panels. Though you may not like the more dynamic "non panel-ish" action scenes. I sure am not trying to tell you how to make the comic =p
Kiah at 4:37PM, Feb. 24, 2008
Too bad now he's MORE dead! You crush a zombie's skull with a mighty headbutt and he's not getting back up. :D
BlkKnight at 3:39PM, Feb. 24, 2008
Good thing he's already dead.
aznBOI at 2:15PM, Feb. 24, 2008
awesome! I can't wait to read mORE!
Eddie Jensen at 1:27PM, Feb. 24, 2008
I've gotta say all the angles were fantastic cept the next to last panel, that ones kinda a stop in the ction but not so much that I would have figured it out if you hadnt commented on the angles.