Chapter 1 - Page 23
Kiah on July 5, 2008
Sorry for missing the last update, my hand has been hurting from drawing too much so I'm taking a bit easier (I literally spend all day drawing when I have days off), I'll try not to let that happen again unless otherwise specified.
This page took some effort to complete. I'm trying to clean up my inking style a bit and trying to make my frames a bit nicer during portions of the story that are not intense or combat riddled. I also spent a while trying to make my colouring look nicer.
Every page, I try to improve a bit more. It's pretty fun.
I just woke up so this update is awkward. I've got to go to work now.
Page 24 is already halfway complete. I'll definitely have it in time for next Sunday. I may do a wednesday update if I think I can get 25 done by Sunday but I've got alot of work this week so we'll see.
_Loki_ at 9:36PM, July 16, 2008
Love the 3rd panel.
worstcase at 11:36AM, July 8, 2008
so now i love your comic.
JustNoPoint at 11:13AM, July 8, 2008
I don't think he has to tell her about rough. She seems pretty capable of helping herself. Great work again.
CoyoteLongshot at 9:06PM, July 7, 2008
I definitely like the changes you're making, the comic looks even better ^_^
lba at 9:10PM, July 6, 2008
What you did with the sketch lines really helps keep those straight lines from sticking out too much from the rest of your style. The looser inking sets you apart from a lot of other stuff.
Demons_and_Purgatory at 6:01PM, July 6, 2008
Wowzers, this page yanked at my heartstrings. I nearly cried.... mostly because Petre is my favorite character and it's really hurting me while they're discussing him after his death. I'm so upset and I'm not even part of the plot. Keep up the good work! If his becomes a real comic, I'm TOTALLY buying. You're so great with facial expressions. I'm floored.
Carbajal3000 at 12:31PM, July 6, 2008
great Page.