Chapter 2 - Page 31
Kiah on Sept. 28, 2008
I like to get these up at midnight usually but I've been stricken with some debilitating illness. I haven't been legitimately sick in 3 years and yet this weekend I've fallen prey to whatever this is :(
Anyway, here's page 31! More exposition and whatnot. It feels very strange sometimes to be doing this much actual writing, but I think I'm getting better at thinking about how how characters would actually talk. Hopefully it reads smoothly.
I'm also getting faster at working on the comic which is a good thing :) I can always get my homework and a page done every week without sacrificing any quality!
Hope you like it :)
Nako at 6:51PM, Oct. 12, 2008
As for me, I need to work on non-crappy talky bits! Great talky work! =^_^=
JustNoPoint at 5:34AM, Oct. 1, 2008
Really good dialogue. The images kept me interested enough to make them flow very well. Get well soon. Another perfect page.
Kiah at 5:15PM, Sept. 30, 2008
haha Thanks guys and gals! DAJB, I've really enjoyed the writing in your comics so hearing some kudos from you on mine is really a treat! Thanks muchly! CS3, thanks for the well wishes, another person I really respect around here, its great hearing things about the writing from you guys :)
The Derkomai at 7:44PM, Sept. 29, 2008
Mmmmmm... Yummo.
cs3ink at 5:21AM, Sept. 29, 2008
Great dialogue. Really reads very natural. Hope you start to feel better. Being sick sucks.
DAJB at 3:54AM, Sept. 29, 2008
Like it? I love it! But I've always been a sucker for the talky bits! Extra kudos for having the characters [i]do[/i] something while they exposit, instead of falling back on a series of talking heads.