Chapter 1 - Page 22
Mzpblue on Sept. 22, 2010
Darn it, I missed the day my six minutes! SIX MINUTES.
I was so close…
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Mzpblue on Sept. 22, 2010
Darn it, I missed the day my six minutes! SIX MINUTES.
I was so close…
Mzpblue at 1:05PM, Sept. 24, 2010
No, he just slipped because he's lame like that. He was trying to do an awesome twist kick-type of thing, then failed.
xVegitox at 1:15PM, Sept. 23, 2010
So did the beetle guy trip him?
Ink_wolf at 6:32AM, Sept. 23, 2010
Very cliche, I hope you have some kind of twist on the story. Nice shroud of darkness though.