Ok,you want some feedback?Ok,lets start:
1.Your comic has 2 PAGES.That's not enough to judge a comic by.
You have to update alot more,and update often.
2.Resize the second page.Readers hate it when they have to scroll down.
3.MS Paint is the worst art tool to use.It looks ugly and many readers get turned off by it.Your art is a bit better,but...it's still MS Paint.
Use a better program(GIMP/Photoshop) or simply draw it by hand.
4.You will get more readers just by being active in the DD community.And comment on other people's comics.You have to give feedback in order to receive it
Hope I helped a little :)
Plague Doctor at 8:15PM, Aug. 21, 2010
Ok,you want some feedback?Ok,lets start: 1.Your comic has 2 PAGES.That's not enough to judge a comic by. You have to update alot more,and update often. 2.Resize the second page.Readers hate it when they have to scroll down. 3.MS Paint is the worst art tool to use.It looks ugly and many readers get turned off by it.Your art is a bit better,but...it's still MS Paint. Use a better program(GIMP/Photoshop) or simply draw it by hand. 4.You will get more readers just by being active in the DD community.And comment on other people's comics.You have to give feedback in order to receive it Hope I helped a little :)