All I can say is to clean up the art. First go over with a computer paintshop erasier to get rid of the pincel lines you erased. Second get rid of the lines completely, it shouldn't be to hard since it's white space.Finaly clean up the art itself, it's ok but somethings like the stockings are weird, just take a little more time and make all the lines work and it should be ok. I don't mean to sound harsh but that's just my crit.
katgems at 11:49AM, Nov. 2, 2006
and i only have that many eraser marks b/c it's one of those comics i have to do really quick to make a schoool deadline...
katgems at 2:17AM, Oct. 16, 2006
the lines and stuff are there to show that it's a school comic.
Demagogue at 5:00PM, Sept. 19, 2006
All I can say is to clean up the art. First go over with a computer paintshop erasier to get rid of the pincel lines you erased. Second get rid of the lines completely, it shouldn't be to hard since it's white space.Finaly clean up the art itself, it's ok but somethings like the stockings are weird, just take a little more time and make all the lines work and it should be ok. I don't mean to sound harsh but that's just my crit.