Issue One Page 2
Eric_blitz on Aug. 24, 2009
This turned out–pretty bad…I'm not really happy with any of the pages uptill 8…this is the first page Brandon (iwannabiscut) inked. And well…he didnt do it right. So it messed up the picture and makes the art look weird. I start inking again on page 8. But I also made a crap ton of mistakes on this page. Nothing looks right to me. I'd redraw it if I could. And I just might eventully.
Anyway FLASHBACK! This wont be the last time you see Lisa…but she's a hell of a lot different next time.
I think the main reasion I dont like this is the prespective on the last panel..its so far off it hurts me. Anyway, just stick it out till page 8. The art looks better.
Eaither way, wont be updating till friday. I'm trying to clean up brandons inks and letter the pages up to page 7–so I'm finding it hard to find time to draw page 8. I might do layouts at school tomorrow…then do the real thing when I get home. Damn I wish I had more time.
UPDATE: Bad news guys and gals (HA! As if we have any female views. Or do we o.O if your there…let us know) its been decided by me abd iwannabiscut that we'll be updating ONCE A WEEK for a while., Dont get me worng, I have up to page 8 or 9 completely ready to upload. But I'm have a hard time getting the other pages done and I dont wanna fall behind. So, once a week. For awhile. We'll eventully get our shit togother. Promise.
fukujinzuke at 9:49AM, March 30, 2010
Even if you're not happy with the art, I think the script is really good on this page. Very convincing choice of words for the characters.
Eric_blitz at 2:33PM, Aug. 29, 2009
HOLY CRAP! BRANDON--WORST EDITOR EVER! XD Theres a mojor glitch on his shirt--two different designs. Wow--I'm sorry. I'm ashamed of this page in every way. I honestly coulnt be more sorry about this.