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Eric_blitz on Sept. 8, 2009
And now we meet the big baddie!
I dont really like this page. Its a good example of bad inking—brandon. XD no but really–I dont like it. But on the other hand we see our heroes foe! (heh I said 'foe) I tried to fix what I could on the computer but I think that might have made it worse–like I said. Page 8 o.O
idstudios at 5:51AM, Sept. 15, 2009
Having read from the beginning...I must say that I am a tad bit confused. The story doesn't follow a particular flow. It jumps around. The protagonist discovers these powers then the story jumps to a diner. Then it jumps to the bad guy. I'm not trying to be a jerk but I think the story itself needs some fine-tuning.
Iwannabiscut at 11:44PM, Sept. 11, 2009
I! get killed..XD the person in the bottumn left a few pages back was eric eating a taco- and the ass hole thought it would be funny to have him kill me!!! XD
Eric_blitz at 1:37PM, Sept. 10, 2009
It changes scenes. We see Mike again next page
silverdragon1 at 9:11PM, Sept. 9, 2009
wait a minute what happened here?