LUIGI ROX at 4:52PM, March 20, 2007

To bekefel-YOU SUCK

LUIGI ROX at 3:22PM, March 16, 2007

MUTED

LUIGI ROX at 12:54PM, March 16, 2007

OK DP Ill do that ;)

darkpower101010 at 12:47PM, March 16, 2007

Your spriting skills have improved a lot since your last work. Good job. It still needs some improvement, though. The speech bubbles are inconsistant. Choose one, and stick with it. The ones in the first pannel are probably the best, but you need to move the text to the center a little more. The layout is also pretty messy. Make all pannels the same size and choose a good background colour (preferably black). And try to avoid breaking the fourth wall. Those jokes have been done to death. Overall, you're doing a pretty good job. This is a lot better then some of your other comics that I've seen.

LUIGI ROX at 10:53AM, March 16, 2007

BTW:Its time for E 2.

LUIGI ROX at 10:18AM, March 16, 2007

WHY DID YOU DO THAT??

Bekefel at 6:09AM, March 16, 2007

My...eyes... *smacks LUIGI ROX with rolled up newspaper*

LUIGI ROX at 5:19AM, March 16, 2007

Oh yeah Sorry for the :O drawing.