Patricia knows she's got who she was looking for, and Mary knows she knows, and both know that all it takes is one word in the wrong place for the game to be up. I can't shake the feeling that, each in her own way, actually both of them are enjoying this game, not just Mary. Who'll throw the towel first? - you know what I like about this story? Unlike many other horror stories of this type, in this one neither the police nor the adversaries nor the bystanders are dumb, and even if the victims are fools, they're clearly not brainless either. That makes it so much more interesting.
And once again, the detective thinks she's got a handle on Mary, the disgust in Mary's voice making her think she might have found a motive that fits her theory.
While our detective despises Allen and his friends, Mary gives the impression that she prefers to go to bed with them - otherwise it would appear that the two women have something important in common.
You do realize that when Mary said she was "intimately acquainted" with Allen and his friends she's sarcastically talking about the rape, right? Dee - Succubus writer dude
PaulEberhardt at 8:58AM, March 30, 2024
Patricia knows she's got who she was looking for, and Mary knows she knows, and both know that all it takes is one word in the wrong place for the game to be up. I can't shake the feeling that, each in her own way, actually both of them are enjoying this game, not just Mary. Who'll throw the towel first? - you know what I like about this story? Unlike many other horror stories of this type, in this one neither the police nor the adversaries nor the bystanders are dumb, and even if the victims are fools, they're clearly not brainless either. That makes it so much more interesting.
TheDeeMan at 12:20PM, March 30, 2024
Thank you for saying so. As the writer, it is much appreciated. XD Dee - Succubus writer dude
Myk at 6:00AM, March 29, 2024
And once again, the detective thinks she's got a handle on Mary, the disgust in Mary's voice making her think she might have found a motive that fits her theory.
Othosmops at 1:26AM, March 29, 2024
While our detective despises Allen and his friends, Mary gives the impression that she prefers to go to bed with them - otherwise it would appear that the two women have something important in common.
TheDeeMan at 1:43AM, March 29, 2024
You do realize that when Mary said she was "intimately acquainted" with Allen and his friends she's sarcastically talking about the rape, right? Dee - Succubus writer dude