One-Trick Pony
ShaRose49 on June 13, 2019
Sorry it’s a tad later—or at least I think it is, I haven’t been keeping the best track lol. This page was a real pain in some ways, as I’m trying to up my game with backgrounds. UGHHH. (I totally forgot about that weapons display by the door for the last few pages lmao). I’m sure I’ll get used to it and even enjoy it soon, but for now it’s kinda…yeah.
How is the dialogue btw? A lot of the time my dialogue is just thought up on the spot, as I have a rough idea of what they're gonna say in my head but don’t always figure everything out till the page is finished.
lokpolymorfa at 9:28PM, Jan. 6, 2020
I love as how the comic went by, the dialogue became less congested and there's more room to breathe. Keep up the good work.
ShaRose49 at 9:22AM, Jan. 7, 2020
Thanks, and yeah, I still have a lot to learn :3
Avart at 9:22PM, June 13, 2019
Backgrounds are really good, and it's normal to miss a thing between panels (happens all the time for me LOL). I barely use backgrounds and just use them to tell the reader where are the characters, usually in the first panel only. About the dialogue, I think it's fine. What I really enjoy, is the characters expressions ;)
ShaRose49 at 9:29PM, June 13, 2019
Thanks so much for the feedback, it’s really helpful. Haha expressions are the funnest part sometimes