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carvajal on March 26, 2006
Had to erase an entire leg for this picture. I don't care how super she is, a leg just can't bend like that. Anyway, I took it out and I believe it's more natural like this.
carvajal on March 26, 2006
Had to erase an entire leg for this picture. I don't care how super she is, a leg just can't bend like that. Anyway, I took it out and I believe it's more natural like this.
carvajal at 8:18PM, March 29, 2006
Hmmm, okay I can feel you guys. I looked at your work iago, you and Ozone make a valid point. I'm gonna give it a shot.
Ozoneocean at 9:03AM, March 29, 2006
Hey I'm not that amazing man. ^^ I'm a sucker for comics about sexy chicas though! Iago makes a good suggestion about the font, you can find some good ones at [url=http://blambot.com/]Blambot.com[/url]. The Mexican setting also adds a lot of uniqueness to the work for me.
iagojester at 11:45PM, March 28, 2006
This comic is very word-heavy. I suggest a better font (one I can skim like a college text-book) because the fancy script makes me not want to read all the words even more. Besides- comics with naked women arne't supposed to have more than a handful of words per page anyway. It's just not right otherwise.
carvajal at 7:31PM, March 28, 2006
Thanks for your comments Ozoneocean, it is an honor to have you visit. I think you are one of, if not the best out here. I suddenly feel a bit of pressure to perform, but thatâs a good thing ;)
Ozoneocean at 11:07AM, March 28, 2006
That top pose hooked me into your comic enough to read through the whole thing and favourite it. Nice work on the counter in the bottom panel.