A few things I want to say about your comics:
1. They make no sense, whatsoever.
2. Your spelling and grammar are horrible.
3. DON'T PUT SCENARY IN THE BACKGROUND!!
4. Use an outline OTHER than black, when your panel or gutters are black.
5. Your storyline is all jumpy. If they are in a different place then they were the last time we saw them, put in a box that says "Later" and where they are.
therealtj at 9:41AM, April 23, 2007
Also, TRY to aline your panels.
therealtj at 9:40AM, April 23, 2007
A few things I want to say about your comics: 1. They make no sense, whatsoever. 2. Your spelling and grammar are horrible. 3. DON'T PUT SCENARY IN THE BACKGROUND!! 4. Use an outline OTHER than black, when your panel or gutters are black. 5. Your storyline is all jumpy. If they are in a different place then they were the last time we saw them, put in a box that says "Later" and where they are.