I am right there behind ya, Megasonic. This what I said last page:
[quote]Needs backgrounds.
Needs text bubbles.
Needs periods
Can't have drawn motion lines.
Can't have sprites overlapping the panel outline (panel 6)
Can't have multiple exlamation points after one another.[/quote]
He's right, Lucario. Not only are all the things he said about bittage mixing, awful blood effects, spilling into next panel, no transformation effects etc. correct, but you NEED to improve, or everyone's gonna start flaming you. You simply cannot use Paint as an excuse, because people can make awesome comics in Paint.
Do not mute us, we're trying to help you get better.
No offence but.... terrible.
First of all, no backgrounds? Secondly, no textboxes? Terrible bittage mixing.. no credit given for the sprites. Awful blood effects, and why is the blood into panel five? Not so great grammar. I'm sorry but if you don't improve on these things, your not gonna get very high ratings, and having only paint is no excuse. I only have paint, lots of people don't buy photoshop and still get fives. Terrible storyline, no effects to show samus's transformation? Nothing to stat WHY she even changed?
SmartSpriter at 2:34PM, Aug. 13, 2007
I am right there behind ya, Megasonic. This what I said last page: [quote]Needs backgrounds. Needs text bubbles. Needs periods Can't have drawn motion lines. Can't have sprites overlapping the panel outline (panel 6) Can't have multiple exlamation points after one another.[/quote] He's right, Lucario. Not only are all the things he said about bittage mixing, awful blood effects, spilling into next panel, no transformation effects etc. correct, but you NEED to improve, or everyone's gonna start flaming you. You simply cannot use Paint as an excuse, because people can make awesome comics in Paint. Do not mute us, we're trying to help you get better.
Megasonic at 1:57PM, Aug. 13, 2007
No offence but.... terrible. First of all, no backgrounds? Secondly, no textboxes? Terrible bittage mixing.. no credit given for the sprites. Awful blood effects, and why is the blood into panel five? Not so great grammar. I'm sorry but if you don't improve on these things, your not gonna get very high ratings, and having only paint is no excuse. I only have paint, lots of people don't buy photoshop and still get fives. Terrible storyline, no effects to show samus's transformation? Nothing to stat WHY she even changed?