More than any comic I have ever done this one was about the characters. No obvious parody or satire, no boobs bursting out all over, it's about the people. Which is probably why it fell so flat. Much of this scene was awful the first time around. I mean painfully awful. The info dumps were obvious, even forced and the reactions of the characters didn't make sense in light of later developments. So the next two scenes have had all the dialogue changed and even the sequence of events has been adjusted.
And so here is Searsha and Larya in their first scene together. And we see some more of the Nasnor archers. I needed a bridge to reintroduce the battlefield so I cooked up the first panel from unused extra images. Just a candid shot of the response of soldiers to the results of their handiwork. It was common in Medieval warfare for archers to reclaim arrows from the fallen to use again. At Portiers and Agincourt young boys ran out to reclaim arrows during the actual battle. So the archers go out to reclaim spent arrows.
Originally it wasn't at all obvious at this meeting that Larya and Searsha were lovers. In fact it was decidedly “meh” because I hadn't developed their backgrounds yet. Since sex plays such an important part in their magical energies, sorceresses are very sensuous women. They are invariably bisexual and since their training sequesters them in a single sex environment for a long time, many form very intimate and long lasting relationships with other sorceresses. However, these relationships are “open” and sorceresses freely move from partner to partner. In order to marry a sorceress must go through a series of rituals where she is stripped of her magic and her life of service to the Golden Goddess. In effect to cease being a sorceress. However, that is not to say that sorceresses do not have children. A sorceress can only have female children who will in all likelihood become sorceresses or priestesses. This is an entire culture with its own ideas.
Larya and Searsha have a long history together and read each other very well. After all as sorceresses they can “read” each other's aura and have learned to trust their instincts and respect each other's boundaries. But like all relationships theirs is “complicated” and they kind of have their own version of commitment.
Any similarity between this life and that of nuns may not be a coincidence. How could a life of service like this survive into our history? I have outlined a few stories with Searsha as a Medieval nun and certain orders of nuns being a latter day version of the Sisters of the Golden Goddess.
Gunwallace has made a great theme for Sword Of Kings in the latest Quackcast :)
http://www.theduckwebcomics.com/quackcast/episode-328-how-to-get-people-to-read-your-comic
Yeah, I remember her from page 12 now... Ya know, it's interesting that, in RL, a larger percentage of Artists, Musicians, etc... tend to be less exclusively heterosexual compared to the general populace (the hypothesis is, with their art, they already think 'out side the box' anyway, and that mindset tend to bleed over into other areas...) Don't have a source for that... Anyway... Seems that, in a fantasy world, Wielders of Magic might have similar 'expanded minds' too...
In fantasy world-building I feel it's more important to come up with how the residents of the world see such things as opposed to how we would explain it. Explain things according to their worldview and leave the early 21st century behind. :)
Ozoneocean at 12:31AM, June 20, 2017
Gunwallace has made a great theme for Sword Of Kings in the latest Quackcast :) http://www.theduckwebcomics.com/quackcast/episode-328-how-to-get-people-to-read-your-comic
bravo1102 at 2:39AM, June 20, 2017
And it is most regal and exciting!
El Cid at 8:27AM, June 19, 2017
So sorceresses are hippie nuns. I won't hold it against 'em!
bravo1102 at 4:41PM, June 19, 2017
But you'll never find one saying "groovy" and they have violent un-hippy tendencies.
jerrie at 8:07AM, June 19, 2017
@Kimluster...thats an interesting point you made. I noticed that with artists and show business people also
KimLuster at 11:21AM, June 19, 2017
Haha do we webcomic creators fall in with that group?!!
bravo1102 at 8:13AM, June 19, 2017
I've read might have something to do with how creativity is mapped in the brain.
KimLuster at 7:33AM, June 19, 2017
Yeah, I remember her from page 12 now... Ya know, it's interesting that, in RL, a larger percentage of Artists, Musicians, etc... tend to be less exclusively heterosexual compared to the general populace (the hypothesis is, with their art, they already think 'out side the box' anyway, and that mindset tend to bleed over into other areas...) Don't have a source for that... Anyway... Seems that, in a fantasy world, Wielders of Magic might have similar 'expanded minds' too...
KimLuster at 11:20AM, June 19, 2017
I can accept that ;)
bravo1102 at 8:18AM, June 19, 2017
In fantasy world-building I feel it's more important to come up with how the residents of the world see such things as opposed to how we would explain it. Explain things according to their worldview and leave the early 21st century behind. :)
bravo1102 at 8:12AM, June 19, 2017
Or at least for Narthatheian sorceresses it's part of the weave of magic in the fabric of the cosmos as personified by the Golden Goddess Annah.
plymayer at 4:43AM, June 19, 2017
Another great page.
plymayer at 4:43AM, June 19, 2017
Agincourt - I still have my bow fingers //gesture//.
plymayer at 4:42AM, June 19, 2017
"no boobs bursting out all over" - WTF?
bravo1102 at 5:08AM, June 19, 2017
Nudity only in the context of the story. ;)