And now the lesbian sex scene between Searsha and Larya. The comic has to earn that “M” rating. I can't use the term lesbian in the comic. It has too specific an origin and the island of Lesbos probably isn't called that yet. Lots of filters and shadows and strategically placed speech balloons but still not a “T”.
I tossed out the original dialogue for this whole sequence and have been mulling it over and over. The images were finished early last week, but I hated the original dialogue as it served little purpose as far as the story line. So Larya is leading up to something but first– sex. Sex can soften up a partner for a difficult conversation.
Larya and Searsha met when Searsha was a courtesan and Larya her maid. They became BFF but did not become lovers until they were in the sorceress school in Nasnor. It is subtly encouraged among the students so they learn about themselves and experience and share magical energy. Often the bonds they make there will serve them during their careers and it fosters a feeling of sisterhood. Though forbidden marriage or long-term monogamous relationships some sorceresses bond to another in a casual long-distance relationship like Searsha and Larya. It also strengthens the bonds of sisterhood between sorceresses. Petty disputes, divas and selfishness are not tolerated, but occasional bitchiness is expected.
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There are only about seven or eight pages remaining in Book One. It's about four issues of a standard comic.
Hehe they're checking all the reasons they should shag each other, as if we need more than one ;) Good thing their culture is so different than ours - a general recount of recent sex partners often kills the mood, so I've found!
jerrie at 10:20AM, Oct. 24, 2017
great scene
bravo1102 at 9:05PM, Oct. 24, 2017
Thank you.
El Cid at 2:50PM, Oct. 23, 2017
Nice, saucy imagery here. That happens to me a lot, where I end up delaying a page because I'm just not happy with the dialogue I have written for it.
Jason Moon at 8:07AM, Oct. 23, 2017
I didn't realize searsha swung that way. Always a little disappointing....Great lighting effects,they really look good with the dark room
KimLuster at 6:25AM, Oct. 24, 2017
lol Okay!! I was pretty sure I got the gist wrong!!
Jason Moon at 6:25PM, Oct. 23, 2017
oh no Kim, what I mean is it's disappointing for me because she is beautiful and since she is Bi there is more competition :)
bravo1102 at 5:36PM, Oct. 23, 2017
All sorceresses are bisexual.
KimLuster at 1:35PM, Oct. 23, 2017
Jason, are you saying it's 'always a little disappointing' when a character 'swings that way'?
Jason Moon at 12:26PM, Oct. 23, 2017
ahhh I see them now. So it's the moonlight shining on them
bravo1102 at 9:05AM, Oct. 23, 2017
Look real close and you'll see stars in the sky. They're outside.
KimLuster at 7:38AM, Oct. 23, 2017
Hehe they're checking all the reasons they should shag each other, as if we need more than one ;) Good thing their culture is so different than ours - a general recount of recent sex partners often kills the mood, so I've found!
bravo1102 at 9:07AM, Oct. 23, 2017
You'll see next page that things may not be that easy.
plymayer at 3:09AM, Oct. 23, 2017
Charming.
bravo1102 at 7:36AM, Oct. 23, 2017
You could almost say it was romantic.