I have no idea when I'll be getting to Book Two as my work schedule has changed and all the time I previously spent working on this has vanished. Maybe we're all better off.
Self deprecation is a way to fish for compliments? Not to someone with my pathology. There is no praise or compliments great enough to fill the hole that is occupied in most people by self-esteem. I will dismiss or find fault with any and all praise. “You're just saying that.” “I am so annoying that you're just saying that to shut me up.”
I really think some of this stuff is incredible. I step outside of my head and my jaw drops at what appears on the page. I can't believe I did that. I don't believe it. Somebody is making some really pretty pictures. What the hell is wrong with the world that people don't line up and look at them. Screw the story, just look at those freaking graphics. Kind of neat.
Nah it's just dolls. If it was drawn it'd be worth reading but anything else? Nah.
perfect choice of 'shots' in each panel - the emotional beats come across just right with this blocking of characters and framing - in the dialogue too. Aces! Sword of Aces! You got a promotion!
Pictures are pretty (these outfits...wow!!), but dialogue and story is the real winner here!! Still... I get it - art does matter for most readers on a site like this... Way too many people look at your comic and see dolls and don't go any further, realizing the setup and digital editing behind everything...
Be so much easier to draw this thing if only my hand would let me. But soaking my arm in ice after drawing a couple of panels just isn't my idea of a hobby.
I am sorry you dont think your work is very good Bravo. I do. My pirate comic is heavily influenced from your work here on Sword of Kings. I think this is your best comic so far in both art and writing.
El Cid at 5:47PM, Nov. 8, 2017
Maybe better to give her some space. Definitely safer!
Jason Moon at 7:50AM, Nov. 8, 2017
Ok Searsha, acting a little immature. Hey at least she sucks up her tantrum in the end
bravo1102 at 8:08AM, Nov. 8, 2017
Considering she didn't have much of a childhood, give her a pass. ;)
Banes at 7:21AM, Nov. 8, 2017
perfect choice of 'shots' in each panel - the emotional beats come across just right with this blocking of characters and framing - in the dialogue too. Aces! Sword of Aces! You got a promotion!
bravo1102 at 7:48AM, Nov. 8, 2017
Something I didn't notice till all done is that the dawn sky here matched Aleeka's hair.
KimLuster at 6:30AM, Nov. 8, 2017
Pictures are pretty (these outfits...wow!!), but dialogue and story is the real winner here!! Still... I get it - art does matter for most readers on a site like this... Way too many people look at your comic and see dolls and don't go any further, realizing the setup and digital editing behind everything...
plymayer at 1:56AM, Nov. 8, 2017
Your dolls are great. Hope you find time soon to continue.
bravo1102 at 3:33AM, Nov. 8, 2017
Be so much easier to draw this thing if only my hand would let me. But soaking my arm in ice after drawing a couple of panels just isn't my idea of a hobby.
plymayer at 1:54AM, Nov. 8, 2017
A small hole in her armor of standoffishness.
bravo1102 at 2:00AM, Nov. 8, 2017
May be all that's needed.
jerrie at 1:35AM, Nov. 8, 2017
I am sorry you dont think your work is very good Bravo. I do. My pirate comic is heavily influenced from your work here on Sword of Kings. I think this is your best comic so far in both art and writing.