Book Two, page 7

bravo1102 on Nov. 27, 2017

Thanks for your support. Please if you haven't, please do the “like” thing. And freaking comment. A few sparing words mean a lot to me. I don't need an ode of praise. Just one thing you like or one thing that could be improved.

Lately I've been checking back on saved pages before posting only to discover weird formatting errors. Things like the font on a word balloon changed or the text off center. Stuff caused by a random mouse click just before I go to control -s to save. Have to watch for everything anymore.

The telescope was completely scratch-built from plastic. I also built a smaller one with a leather case for my Sharpe figure. The handgonne is an accessory from the Marx knight figures. A few years ago they did a special re-issue and because I loved them so much as a kid I bought as many as I could afford. Tons of accessories in nearly unpaintable plastic but it's stuff I couldn't find anywhere else. If this ever gets that far there is even horse armor.

That's a big if.

Would I be better off going back to T&A grindhouse? I'm not as sensitive about that as I am about this. This was supposed to be special and different and I am putting a lot more into it as opposed to the usual action schlock fest.

Though there are some ideas for the rewrite where I could go down that road and just leave this a pleasant prelude.

You know Falkimir may be promised to Illya, but it seems he has some chemistry with Glorianna. Wait, Glorianna is really Illya's big sister Arianne – you don't think–?