Believe it or not, those last 2 panels don't bother me. Since there is a break between them, I read the extra length as movement. I think it's an excellent page you've made here. Don't listen to that devil on your shoulder!
this page gave me fits for whatever reason, I struggle w/transitional pages AND Ayamu's legs look really long in the last two panels...oh well, moving along!
croxtonhas at 4:10PM, Nov. 13, 2010
wow!
Obo Biber at 4:46PM, Nov. 9, 2010
Believe it or not, those last 2 panels don't bother me. Since there is a break between them, I read the extra length as movement. I think it's an excellent page you've made here. Don't listen to that devil on your shoulder!
metsuke at 7:35AM, Nov. 8, 2010
this page gave me fits for whatever reason, I struggle w/transitional pages AND Ayamu's legs look really long in the last two panels...oh well, moving along!